I Rely on My Loser Apprentices to Survive

(The review contains spoilers) Uh-huh, how should I put it, I have read many novels in Tomato Novels, and this is the first novel that I actively want to review but feel embarrassed. Generally speaking, the flow of the book is very clear, one chapter links to another, and it can be clearly seen that the author has laid out the outline, from the protagonist's initial acceptance of four apprentices, to the establishment of Wuxiang Palace, to the grudges and grudges with the eldest apprentice a hundred years ago. This aspect is indeed well written. Next, I will talk about the areas where I think this book needs improvement. Starting from the third chapter of the book, I begin to answer the foreshadowing laid earlier, which is the apprentice that the protagonist took in a hundred years ago. From the chapters, it can be seen that the author wants to show our readers the love and hatred between the master and the apprentice, and wants to impress the readers. In this process, it can be seen that the author is very careful; but starting from this chapter also leads to a very big problem in my opinion: the reader has a sense of distance from the book. For a good novel, the emotions of the protagonist and the reader should be closely intertwined, so that there is a sense of involvement. But in this novel, starting from the second chapter, I felt a sense of distance from the novel. The third chapter, which should have been full of warmth and touching, had no emotion in my heart, and I felt like I was outside the story. . . This may be due to the author's lack of control over the text, but I think the author is also aware of this situation and is trying his best to improve it. I haven't read the latest one yet, because it's too late now, it's already two o'clock ( •̥́ ㉨ •̀ू ). Based on the previous content I give this book four stars. In addition, if you are new friends, please give me a like if you see this ( ,,´･㉨･)ﾉ"(´っω･｀｡)（嘤嘤嘤） I wish you a good mood all day~~~

It feels a bit aggrieved that the protagonist, one of the three great immortals, is in a realm several lower than himself and has to use his lifespan to use magic. But I still like this type of novel.

This book has aspects of cultivation, lolita, vixen, yandere, and master-disciple romance. In short, this book contains everything I want to read. It would be nice if there were more daily routines between master and disciple.

I only learned about the book Junior Brother, You Are So Not Human. It also has a prequel. It can be said that the author is so nice, and it completely captured my heart. Both books are very good, or they are both too good-looking. I look forward to the author's next novel [smirk][snicker][smirk]

Highly recommended. I read it in one sitting, a very good book. Fantasy, harem, master and apprentice, invincible flow, the writing should be impartial. This kind of relationship between master and apprentice is really great, especially the love and death between the eldest apprentice, which is really addictive. The climax of the book is okay, but the length is not very big, yandere, yyds. Overall, how should I put it? I can't describe it better. You will feel that it is quite ordinary, but the plot is very attractive and the characters in it are also very well created. You will want people to keep watching, and the needle will not poke at the air on the mountain. No more pretending, I'm showing off my cards, I'm hanging silk, I love watching.

The book is pretty good, with a relaxed plot, from the amnesiac Immortal Lord who accepts a female disciple, to slowly regaining his memory, and finally becoming the way of heaven. But I have to mention some shortcomings. First, there are a lot of holes dug, and many of them are not filled in. Second, it is a bit aggrieved. Let's not talk about being subdued by a female apprentice who is also in the Celestial Realm. NND, you are an immortal in the Celestial Realm, and you have to fight back and forth with the Xuanxian Realm one level lower than you. It's not bad that you can't kill an enemy two levels lower than you with all your strength. Third, although the ending is good, it doesn't reach the height expected. Hope to keep up the good work.

This kind of subject matter is really good, I like it very much.

Four stars, the ending is too hasty, the process is too compact, the story line is not long, the short story style is okay

To be honest, it is very good. It has a leisure life and a passion for cultivating immortality. It is a good novel. In the end, plainness is the best [laughs] (Personal preferences are different, so there is no need to argue about it) [laughs] I like this style very much, thank the author for his great work!

I like this book very much. The author has a very rich imagination and is not clumsy. Every chapter is a key point. I hope the author will work hard and we will always be here. But can it be faster?

To be honest, after reading so many books, there are only five that can keep me going for a few days. I have been reading this book for nearly a week. The writing is really good. I like this kind of daily life. Although I can't get enough of it, please come on, author⊙▽⊙ So I'm starving for books again! Help!

This is the first time that I stayed up all night waiting for an update for a book like this. It's really great. It's been almost an hour and there's still no update. Even the production team members don't dare to rest like this! ! ! ! ☆ﾟ･*:.｡.☆†_(ﾟ▽ﾟ*)β☆.｡.:*･ﾟ☆

The pace is a bit too fast, but the overall feeling is still good. The latter part is a bit dull, so I skipped reading. I read another of his books and then read this one. It is still good, but the plot is a bit sad and the ending is too fast. I will give it four stars. It is worth reading.

It feels good, the twists are good, the character designs are all unique, and the ending is also a very harmonious scene of reunion. However, the shortcoming is that there are too few chapters, only more than 200 chapters, which is a bit insufficient, but overall it is quite interesting.

After watching the beginning, it was quite interesting, one of the best in its genre. However, it seems that there are not many people there, and there are also few book reviews.

The author is very strong. Although there are some shortcomings, it does not affect the overall quality. I hope you will continue to work hard.

Pure feelings, childhood sweethearts, without losing the inevitability of the growth process. It does not exaggerate the dark side of human nature, and uses the third person to describe the so-called weaknesses of human nature, which brings out the feeling that the symbiosis of light and darkness is originally one. Great book!

This book is quite good. If you are short on books, you can give it a read. After all, Tomato doesn't have any apprenticeship stories. Some of the characters in it are not well described, but the overall performance is not impressive. It is a daily light book. Those who want to read a passionate and invincible book can go away.

I personally think the writing is quite good, but the main character is a bit uncomfortable to watch due to his weak fighting ability. Overall, there is no big problem. The image of each apprentice is well designed, and the five stars are attached ٩( 'ω' )و

I enter the world of mortals for one person, and when they leave, I will leave too, leaving no dust behind in this body. Brother, I want to take someone back to the Cloud Recesses, take him back, and hide him.

I think the search for Suzaku and Xuanwu is a bit fast, and it's basically just a quick glance. The ending is like watching an anime without a sequel, but you know it's over, and you're just wondering how you finished it so quickly. All in all, I think it's worth watching, and it's still five stars.

One of the few novels that I can finish reading. Five stars

Looks good! ! ! I don't like to read systematic novels, but this novel is really good!!!

How should I put it? This novel can be said to be the outline of a similar draft I made (but I didn't write it). By coincidence, I clicked on it to read it. I was pleasantly surprised. I am a close friend. This author has good writing skills. Fortunately, I didn't write it before, otherwise it would have become a stepping stone for the author.

A very nice novel. It's not that the protagonist is too weak. People who say the protagonist is weak have definitely not finished watching the movie. The protagonist has his own difficulties. There is absolutely no situation where the protagonist is in danger of dying once he uses his skills. I hope people who want to watch it can continue to watch it. Really nice to look at. Although I don't know if he has harem stories, I can still read it even though I never like to read harem stories. Somewhat successful. So I gave it five stars.

Not to mention the subject matter, this book has some unique little ideas about time travel, which really surprised me. Let me focus on my feelings about this book. I can't find any major flaws in the logic. I don't find faults in reading books, as long as the logic passes. However, the author is really thoughtful in the logic and filling in. There is less love between children and morality, and more heartfelt and harmonious. I am looking forward to the next book.

Hello author You want to write about daily life, warmth, and getting along with each other. This is really good. But the main character was written in a very frustrating way. If you encounter setbacks, you can arrange for the heroine to help, so that there is interaction and you won't feel aggrieved. In my humble opinion. So give it four stars.

The harem story is very good, I couldn't stop reading it

This book is very good, but every time there is something good, it belongs to the disciple. However, there was no suggestion from Master that the author should write more protagonists.

It's beautiful, why is there no one there?