A Second Chance at Life

Haha, it's the first time I've seen such a good book. It's so strange. If anyone can finish reading this book, his IQ will definitely be very good, and it will be really strange if he does not become a fool. The author used his strange brain to write a book with a wrong head and a wrong tail. I can only sigh deeply. You are a great author, you are a great man.

I looked at dozens of photos without looking at the ratings. The company manager and the director were at odds with each other, so forget it. In the next 10 days, 1,000 acres of real estate was developed. You couldn't even build a single-story steel structure. Do you know how the Huoshenshan Hospital did it? I participated in the Zhengzhou Fangcang Hospital. The number of management personnel did not double or triple compared to normal real estate projects. Several times the management staff and several times the number of workers worked 24 hours a day. It took 10 hours to complete, but not 1 or 2 hours to complete. The preliminary preparation work, procedures, surveying and mapping, and earth excavation, you can't finish the basics in just a few months.

Yu Huanshui's father destroyed his mother's health and got divorced. I don't understand why he still cares about it. If he was the original body, he would still care about it. You have a soul and you still care about nothing.

The author is really mindless in his writing. Even if it is a cool article, don't be too smart. Consider whether it is reasonable or not. You can build a 30-story house in 10 days. It is so easy to do that real estate developers are going crazy. You have given the workers several times their wages, and the workers are quite happy to help you. Do you think the workers are not intelligent enough? You can finish a job that lasts 1-2 years in 10 days. Do you still feel that you are making a profit?

1. The intervention is through the system at the beginning. It is good not to describe the system in a large space, but it should not be too insignificant. The system also contributes to the rise of the protagonist. 2. Yu Chen (the protagonist's son) was lost, and I feel that this novel does not need the character of Yu Chen, because there is no need, and having him is more like an extra burden, and it is not a daddy novel. 3. The previous plots are well connected, but after starting to get involved in the plot of Love 5, the previous things are basically gone. It's like two books combined, making the previous plots meaningless. 4. The emotional main line is not set very well. First of all, after reading the previous chapters, I feel that the protagonist may develop in the direction of the harem. Then after entering the plot of Love 5, the protagonist suddenly only loves Zhuge Dali. As for the women in the front, it feels very abrupt. 5. Generally speaking, the author did not find a good positioning for writing this novel, and the outline may not be very good. (Of course, these are just personal opinions and suggestions, and I hope the author can continue to work hard)

Has the author seen Yu Huanshui? I remember that my son is not Yu Huanshui's, right? With her ex-wife's character, how could she clean up and leave the house? This is a woman who knows that her husband is going to die but she still wants money from her husband.

The author should be careful, the transition of the story and plot is good, but the transition is too thorough, and the protagonist's son is lost! In this case, it would be great to directly change it to time travel.

It was poisonous at the beginning, but after a quick glance it was still poisonous. The pig's foot has traveled through time and has no feelings for the child. You can use him to get close to the young woman. There is no need to have custody rights, and he is not his biological child. Also, the author is illiterate in law. Even if he has so many assets, it will be useless even if he gets divorced and the other party cleans up and leaves the house. Afterwards, he can go to court and a large sum of money will be divided among the marital property. This is what the actual law states

He looked confused. Even though he was being forced to divorce, he still had to pretend to be a divorcee before leaving. And 50% of the shares in this company were worthless. Not many people in the company listened to him. . .

Except for the names of the characters, everything else was written blindly by myself.