Black Mist**

The novel has a clear growth line for the protagonist, and there are clues in the book that the author has laid out a broad background. The logic is reasonable and the writing is good. You can see the growth of the protagonist. However, the data is a bit vague. Readers who like to see powerful types of data accumulated may be a little uncomfortable. It is still a good book and I will support it with 5 stars. Great support from the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

I think it's great. I support the author. We need this kind of new subject matter now. I've long been tired of being the same.

The author's writing style is very good, unlike other novice novels that just do whatever they don't like. The protagonist has a brain, there are many touching stories, and there is also the unrestrained passion of a young man who travels to the end of the world with a sword. The feelings of young people are always poetry. The protagonist Tianyang was created very successfully. There will be a little bit of dissuasion in the early stage, but every bad point of the author is a foreshadowing. It turns out to be like this after reading the book.

How to say it? Surprisingly, it suits my taste very well. I think the story background and personal abilities of this book are quite interesting. I hope the author will work harder, not only to improve his writing skills but also to pay attention to a more realistic style, so that he can have the feeling of looking at a spiritual cage. How to describe the characters? It's just okay, but you can't ask for too much, the protagonist is just okay. I mainly like the novel settings, which are quite good.

Overall it's pretty good and worth recommending. The shining point is the combat description, which can describe the action well without being lengthy, and grasp it just right. And the plot rhythm and story structure are very suitable to my taste. The disadvantage is that the portrayal of the villains is a bit stiff. It feels like all the villains have similar personalities and are cliche. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but I looked through other books and found that in a bad environment like Tomato, where anyone can write a book, it is not easy to dig for gold in the manure. Good books need to be promoted, so I changed it to five stars.

This book gave me a refreshing feeling. There are not many books on this subject, but it is very interesting to read. It's all the same as those of the Immortal Dragon King and so on. I hope the author can stick to it, come on!

There are not many authors who can write novels carefully and not follow the mainstream. They have successfully created the image of Tianyang. As soon as I stepped into the reverse world, I accepted the harsh treatment from the controlling party until now. There is ambition, but also warmth. Be ruthless when you need to be ruthless, kill when you need to be killed, there is no nonsense, and the plot without nt text seems really comfortable.

No harem, no harem, no Madonna, no Madonna, it's very interesting so far, come on, author! No Ninja Turtles, no Ninja Turtles! Come on author! More storylines! Come on! Fewer women!

Chapter 684 has been read. I have read a lot of similar novels, and this one is very good. Really recommend. The evaluation is only 8 or 7 points, which is seriously underestimated. I think it's at least 9.5.

This is definitely a good book worth looking forward to, In the following travel notes, the major castles will go against the boundaries, or create new castles, or compete in battles, which are all worth looking forward to. . In recent years, there have been too many novels with the matryoshka formula. Even an old bookworm can tell if they use their brains and write seriously.

I think this book is a very wonderful novel. I think that before reading a book, a person should not be influenced by others at will, but should try it for himself. After all, others are not you, and everyone has different attitudes and habits towards things, so I don't understand it very well. This book is quite good, and the content in it is also quite exciting. I cannot say that it is necessarily good, but it is not much worse. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

Highly recommended! First of all, this book is to my liking. It has various ranks. The world behind the door is replaced by the earth. Coupled with the author's skills, it is even better. It shows the real human heart under the black mist. What is more terrifying than the black people are often human beings.

The plot is great! It's not like I was invincible from the beginning! I'm super strong! The kind that belongs to the growth type. It suits my taste👍but there are too many girls😫😫😫😫

A very good book, the style is a bit like Lord of Mysteries, but has its own uniqueness, recommended reading

After chasing it all the way, it is finally finished. Overall it is very good. I was watching the anime Soul Cage at the time, and accidentally saw this novel. The content was a bit like Soul Cage, so I followed it intermittently until the end. The content is quite rich. If you like Soul Cage, you can read it.

The rare and exciting novels on the free novel app are much better than those cookie-cutter online novels. The writing is concise, the layout is layered, and it makes people have the urge to read them all. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you.

Personally, I think it's better than most of the books on the current book list. This book was a bit awkward in the early stages, with various problems, but basically they are all understandable. The biggest problem is that it is slow to warm up, but it becomes more exciting in the later stages, and the writing style is constantly being optimized. The reason for the low score of this book on Tomato is probably because the mainstream of Tomato is a system of refreshing novels, which develop very quickly. Most people will not sit down and finish reading this kind of traditional slow-burning novel. After reading a little bit, they will start to go crazy and make outrageous comments. Personally speaking, this book is at least better than some novels that cannot be written without a system. The combat power will not collapse, nor is it unfinished. You can see the author's progress bit by bit. At least it's the best in Tomato. Besides, most of the Tomato novels now really rely on defense. A lot of them are bad. If you read too many interesting articles, you can try this for a change.

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There are very few books that I can keep reading. I have read all three books by Chen Ran. The world view and characterization are really good.

It looks good, go and see it now. Gao Kaiping walks. A good fantasy book, this is what I would say about it. Although looking at his partitions it seems like science fiction, I don't agree. The structure of this book is very much like a fantasy novel, and in some aspects it is a fantasy novel. The plot arrangement is very reasonable and the writing is also good. It is divided into three chapters: settlement, travel, and divine warfare. Only in the settlement chapter can you see some hints of science fiction. The only dissatisfaction is with the protagonist's emotional drama. My evaluation is that it is terrible - the steps are too big, and some things will inevitably be left behind. I don't think the author made too many transitions in the three chapters. Too many setting changes and power changes are not good, but the shortcomings are obvious. In the end, I just felt that the emotional scenes just became a means to make the plot reasonable and satisfactory. For someone like me who is very picky about emotional scenes, this is too bad. It's just that this didn't have a big impact on the entire book. Compared with others, this book is still a little rushed in the final finishing stage, committing the old fantasy habit. The setting is very, very good, which is why I could continue reading the book after realizing that it was more like fantasy. However, I can see a lot of shadows in the setting part, but they are just shadows, so I won't say more. Overall, I like it very much, and this is my consistent review. There is no need to think twice, and there is no need to read it a second time.

The world view and story line of the book are pretty good. Let's focus on the shortcomings here. 1. As far as what I have seen so far, to be honest, the plot is a bit cliche, such as a hero saving a beauty, something that makes you unhappy, revenge, etc. Such cliche plots still appear. It is a bit dissatisfying. It is unlikely that a fool like this will be replaced when he is on a mission. 2. It's just the protagonist's character. He's not thoughtful enough and still has a young mind. 3. Some people don't understand why they don't create some extremely smart think tanks. Characters like this can really add color to the work, especially the plot of the game between the two think tanks. I commend Zhenyao Guan by name. You can learn from this book. Okay, that's basically it. I will continue to read it. I wish this book will get better and better.

After reading so many books on Tomato, I think this is a book worth reading. It is a hundred times better than those about harems. Although they see more people and get higher scores, I feel really speechless. If I see a woman, I will fuck him. Men are really described as pure private parts. So it's useless even if he is powerful. He can't control it. The book is really good. As long as it is not a random harem and there is emotional foreshadowing, I think I can read it. Also, some details of the characters are described in it. Good cheers for the author! ! ! To add, I have been reading books for 10 years from junior high school to now, and I think it is worth reading.

This book is super exciting, but it is too slow to pick up, and it is a new genre. It has been laying the groundwork in the early stage. It is estimated that few readers who like cool novels can survive this period of time. I only started to like it after reading more than 500 chapters. The general summary of the whole novel is "where there is light, there will be darkness. Light does not necessarily mean justice, and darkness does not necessarily mean evil." What dissatisfied me the most after watching it was that the destruction of civilization launched by the Recorder and the Avengers was too simple, without any backlash, or any cause and effect. The Recorder was also too strong. Anyone with a good teammate could sneak to the end of the universe. This skill should have some side effects.

Overall, this is a very good book. There are so many advantages that I won't list them all. Anyone who has read this book probably knows that it is quite comfortable to read overall, and it is not considered a novice. Let me talk about some shortcomings. First, Tianyang's mother died too hastily, and the past of Tianyang and his mother was not portrayed enough. Secondly, Tianyang and the female protagonists were a bit unnatural together. The early foreshadowing was very good, but there was no sense of ritual to confirm the relationship. Personal opinion. Thirdly, the description of the world view is quite large, but I always feel that there will be more plots after the end of this article. This is also purely a personal opinion. I prefer super long ones. However, this book still tells a complete story, and most of the pitfalls have been filled in. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

I personally think this book is actually very good. Many people think that the male protagonist is too holy, and they can't stand it after reading hundreds of pictures. However, they never thought that the protagonist in the early stage is just an ordinary person who has just awakened. Before he awakened, he could be sold by his teammates casually. What can he do when he has just awakened? It's not that all protagonists start with full talents on all levels, they just lack strength. This is the growth of the male protagonist. Some people think the setting is fragmented and inconsistent. But from beginning to end, all the previous settings are understood by the male protagonist himself, and there is no real setting. As our perspective grows a little bit as the male protagonist, and we explore step by step, we will discover the truth of the world in various places. My writing style is not good, so I may not be clear about what I'm saying, but book reviews are just everyone's personal opinions, and whether it's good or not depends on you.

A good book is a good book, the plot is good, and the pitfalls are filled in, but the protagonist's early development is indeed a bit slow. But it doesn't affect the overall quality, I just hope it doesn't suck.

It's very good, the character descriptions are also very realistic, and many supporting characters also have their own characteristics and stories.

Although there are some silly plots at the beginning, the overall structure is clear and the main line is smooth and logical. The rendering of the climax was somewhat inadequate, and some plots ended a little abruptly. However, the overall design of several major battles is good, and the overall situation and details are sure to impress me. Generally speaking, it is a good book on the Tomato platform.

The story is very good, the pace is good, the characters are flesh and blood, and there is no emotional description, which can't be said to be bad. The ending is quite appropriate and good. It's a good book. I personally think I read it relatively quickly hahaha. There are some places that are a little bit toxic in the early stage, but it looks acceptable.

As a web novel, it is already very good. The whereabouts of most of the characters are clearly explained, and there will be no inexplicable disappearances. However, there are still some omissions, such as where the death knell went, and Bai Yinglan and Xingluo. It may be that I was distracted and did not see it. I hope the author can answer it. Also, the ending is not very good. It feels like the battle strength has collapsed. There is also the return of Tianyang, which gives people an unclear feeling. How did it return? Is it just a skin? I feel that the ending mentioned by the author at the end is better. Although the current ending is unsatisfactory, it is not a good direction. It's hard to calm down. He has become a god but can't even go home. In the past ten years, the Yongye Universe has been completely dead. Logically speaking, Tianyang's spirit is being impacted by the black mist every day. How can it last for so long? Or is the restart of the Yongye Universe completed? Tianyang went to the next universe to bring Yongye and also got the chance to go home? In short, the description of this ending is too vague. In the end, those high-dimensional beings seem to be used to add to the plot. I personally don't like this ending. I forgot to mention that the beginning of this book is a bit difficult to read, but after reading it, you will find that it is not bad. After reading it, I feel that this is a very good online article that I have read in recent years, but I think this book can be better and there is a lot of room for improvement. Ps: I hope the author can answer my questions, thank you Gao Kaipingzao is indeed a suitable evaluation. The plot is actually very good. It has deficiencies, growth, brains, and the details are relatively clear. The first and middle stages are very interesting, but the later stages are a bit random. I can only say that this book could have been better.