The Male Disciple of Mount Emei

It's such a pity that a person who can be a heroine died. Why should he be called Shangguan?

This is a novel that I find uncomfortable reading. There are so many messy plots in it that I don't want to read them anymore.

Xiao Nannan, fair and white, was injected with anesthesia and tied up. The air is pumped into the brachial vein, and the eyes are so cute. This book is poisonous. . . . . . . . .

I don't even want to complain anymore. After Wu Yazi passed on his merits, you said you wanted to carry forward the Xiaoyao Sect. But in the end, you thought about getting Lingjiu Palace and merging it into Emei. What's the difference between the sect being wiped out and all connections being cut off? I guess I'll send my regards to you even after Wu Yazi's death.

It's so confusing. The senior sister is Qin Mengyao, Jingxuan, and Jin Bingyun. The realm of refining gods suddenly becomes the master realm. The little dragon girl Li Mochou obviously went down the mountain with the protagonist and met again, but she said that she had been practicing the Nine Yin Manual in the ancient tomb, and then went down the mountain to find someone.

The writing is not bad. Multiple martial arts novels are integrated together without any sense of inconsistency. The connection is very good. It is considered a relatively successful harem novel. However, the ending is too rushed. It would be perfect if I wrote ten more chapters. However, it is not bad to be able to write so many martial arts novels together. I will give you five stars for encouragement.

Novels about harems are actually nothing. It was normal for the ancients to have three wives and four concubines, but they were of the same age or the same generation. Whatever you wrote, forget about your uncle. Yue Lingshan and her mother, Wang Yuyan and her mother and her grandma destroyed the three views. You can barely read it if you write one or two. What a disgusting person you are. It comes from the heart. How clean is the heart of the person who wrote such a book. . In addition, others write books and check out a lot of information, trying to be as close to history as possible or learn from some famous works. What are you writing? What are you writing by mixing the backgrounds of several Jin Yong novels? The Swordsman, The Legend of the Condor Heroes, The Legend of the Condor Heroes, and Legend of the Heavenly Sword and Dragon Slayer appeared at the same time. It's okay if you don't want to do it. The following ones are basically in related chronological order. It's a pig's brain. I have to report this kind of bad author if I abandon the book.

Not so good! ! ! There are some logic problems in the whole novel, and the storyline is not smooth. It feels like the author did not have an outline when writing, and just wrote wherever he thought. The novel starts with the protagonist trying to unify the world. Although the first part is not that good, it is fun to read; the second part is really boring. Some holes in the novel are not filled in; the cultivation levels are a bit confusing and inconsistent; there are contradictions in the storyline; the plot of unifying the world at the end feels too childish. If there is a system, I will accept it, but it is just a group of women + a military book, and the world is leveled in just a few chapters? ? Very perfunctory.

Stallion style, except for the elder sister, all martial arts beauties are concubines regardless of seniority

I like harem stories where the protagonist wants to lick a dog, but I don't like harem stories that feel like licking a dog.