Red Dust**

The writing is actually quite good, but some of the plots are not very good. For example, the plot develops too fast and ends in more than 200 chapters. Also, the male protagonist is still the kind who falls in love with the female protagonist at first sight and is deeply in love with the heroine without knowing the origin. The author will work hard to write a better novel‼ ️‼ ️

Hmm~ Let me use my junior high school knowledge to comment: The plot of the story is complete, and exaggerated writing techniques are used in many places to vividly and powerfully describe the bravery of the male and female protagonists. The writing techniques of environmental description are also used to exaggerate the atmosphere.

Descendants of Pangu, isn't it the woman of the Long family who is in charge of the laws of the three realms?

Overall, this book is okay, but the content is a little flawed. I hope the author can work harder and write a better book!

The plot of the story is compact and not procrastinating, but the ending is too hasty and there is no proper buffering. Also, after reading too many stories in the Dragon Girl series, this book suddenly became the Ming family, which made me feel a little uncomfortable. I wish I could make up an extra chapter. Overall, it's recommended, it's short but not content.

This book is very good, with a perfect ending. I just have two regrets. I don't know who the male protagonist's soul is. Can they be together forever? Another thing is that I didn't see the two of them having a child.

This book is super nice. The male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist at first sight. The female protagonist is powerful and doting.

"Patience is more important than suitability, understanding is more important than love. The sweetest love words are not that I love you, but that I am patient with you now, will be in the future, and will always be."

There are many pitfalls that have not been filled. However, the content of the book is quite good, and it is neat and tidy!

How come no one reads such a good book?

Very satisfied, super exciting! ꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡ ෆ╹ .̮ ╹ෆ (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡\(｡･ω･｡)

Not bad, the plot is novel enough, the plot is coherent, the characters have distinct personalities, and I like the heroine's character very much. The author's writing style is delicate and the emotional line is clear. It is a very good article and worth reading.

Hahaha, no way, the male and female protagonists are too cute, I highly recommend it. So much fun. Give the author a big thumbs up

Almost, the details are described more completely.

It's quite good-looking, very good, but it digs holes but doesn't fill the gap. It's very tempting. I would like to ask the author if there is a second book.

Not bad, very exciting. Worth a look. I wonder if there is a second part?

This book is very nice

Not bad, still watching

I think it's pretty

Looks good, likes it, interesting

I hope there will be a side story

The book is very interesting, but the heroine is too cold towards the hero.

It's pretty good, but there are a lot of holes that haven't been filled [crying][crying][crying]

So what is the identity of the male protagonist😂😂

The writing is smooth and the plot is not too cruel. I like short articles.

I like this kind of fast and accurate novel, without any sloppiness!ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧Good looking

The literature is good, gripping, I really like it

It's similar to the novel about women from the Long family that I read before. I quite like seeing people.

It looks good, but the author has some holes that he hasn't filled in yet.

Mom asked me why I was kneeling and looking at my phone!