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I read the first 50 chapters and felt inspired. 1. It is inevitable to describe conflicts in novels, otherwise it will appear too bland. 2. Most of the current online novels mainly describe conflicts between people. However, when others write like this, following the trend will inevitably fall into the cliché. 3. This novel is a cool article that describes the protagonist's efforts to change the destiny of the country and even the pattern and direction of the world through technological research and development. 4. The author spends a lot of space in the first 50 chapters describing the conflict between a scientific researcher and the unscrupulous media in society, as well as a series of events that occurred in the middle. 5. I guess that the author wanted to bring out the excitement by describing the disgrace of an unscrupulous media person and the revelation of the protagonist's identity. 6. In reality, the state has full control over domestic media, and it is difficult for this kind of thing to expand its influence. However, the novel may describe a parallel world, so the social situation and social environment can be self-justified through subsequent supplementary descriptions, so authenticity does not need to be considered at all, and there is no problem. 7. I think there are still areas for improvement in this novel. I would like to offer this as a suggestion to the author. 8. First of all, you can focus on describing the scientific research environment, national basic scientific research strength, reserve talents, scientific research funding, and the ups and downs in scientific research life, and describe the hard work and difficulties of scientific researchers through these positive or sideways. 9. The exciting point can be to describe the protagonist and scientific researchers who have achieved great results, impact and prospects for the future after hard work. You can also describe interesting stories such as bets between scientific researchers, technological competitions between countries, talent training, etc. 10. Finally, novels do not necessarily only describe conflicts between people, but can also describe conflicts between people and things, people and the universe and nature, things and things, countries and countries, village survival and destruction, etc. In this way, as long as the description is not abrupt, step-by-step and layered, you will definitely be able to write a masterpiece, and you will definitely not fall into the trap.

The big boss of the country told the male protagonist that the research was up to him, but in the end there was no investment, so he still had to go out and get investment himself? Poisonous

How should I put it? Does the author think too highly of Internet celebrities? If the children of academicians like this are simply untouchable by ordinary people, how dare an Internet celebrity spread such rumors about an academician?

It looks good and is realistic and meets many problems in reality. In fact, I hope the country will sanction the entertainment industry and the keyboard warriors and give the heroes the treatment they deserve.

What the hell was this written about? He was beaten throughout the whole process. Is this the protagonist? How depressing was it to watch? Get lost

Perhaps some of the words in this book that overly smear the motherland are part of the plot of the story, but how dare you write such words that wantonly smear the motherland and belittle China? Aren't you afraid of waking up in the middle of the night? And I suspect that you are deliberately belittling and slandering the motherland through your works. Doesn't your conscience hurt? (I'm sorry that my remarks may have been too extreme, but I just can't stand the behavior of wantonly slandering the motherland, even if it promotes the development of the storyline. Who allows you to abuse the motherland like this?)

Shouldn't the children of academicians be protected?

Keep saying that he is the future of the research community, keep saying what he says, and then go home and do what? What are you doing? Another flattery is gone, it's useless. That, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, that, you haven't been putting it off for long, there are so many pictures, not one of them.

The writing is very frustrating. I came back from work the day before and read the novel and felt so uncomfortable giving up.

How to see the sun rising from the west? In Northern Europe, take a flight from Moscow to Helsinki, or South Africa if it is winter. Take a flight to Argentina in the evening so that you can see the sun rising from the west. Why? The reason why the sun sets from the west is because the earth rotates from west to east. All the earth's lines appear to be running to the west. Then you only need to catch up with the horizon on the surface of the earth. When your movement speed exceeds the speed of the horizon, the sun rises from the west to you. So why? Why go to Northern Europe? Because the angular speed of the earth's rotation is constant, that is, 360° in 24 hours, which is the speed of you at the equator. That is, when you are at the equator, the linear speed of the earth is the largest. Sitting on the ground, you travel eight times a day. Thousands of miles, but when you are close to the poles and the latitude is high, the linear speed of the earth is smaller. In this case, the flying speed of an airplane can easily exceed the linear speed of the longitude near the poles, so it is easy to practice. The sun rises from the west.

Who do you enter and exit the academician's residence at will? And there is no one to protect you, especially at the wind outlet! You need to think carefully about the plot of pretending to slap someone in the face. There is a difference between a scientific researcher and the commercial money guy next door.

So embarrassing! The beginning is a bit cliche, maybe to create fun, but in reality, there are people who are responsible for the lives of scientific researchers. When Qin Yao blocks the male protagonist, someone will deal with it, not to mention that Qin Yao later uses it to make money. If he insults the male protagonist online, he has been locked up for a long time😓😓😓😓😓

It's rubbish. What was it written about? I thought it was a joke when the country started to reorganize it. It was written like rubbish. I stopped reading it after reading it for more than 20 years. The article is not true at all.

I've read half of it, so I'll give you a negative review first. Why give negative reviews? It's very simple. I understand everything.

The intention is good, but now in the minds of the younger generation, academicians are not as good as celebrities. There is a problem with China's celebrity culture. One year's salary is not as much as one episode of TV series for famous celebrities.

Everyone who understands understands.

The quality of the article is okay, but I always feel it is too frustrating and reflects real-life problems.

After reading three to five chapters of this novel, I reviewed it. It really affects the viewing experience. Whatever I write, I will review it after three or five pictures and I can't read it. It's really

It's super pretty, and I like it very much! I hope the author can continue writing, and I will go to Shuhuang Square to promote it!

I also wrote a book, but I haven't published it yet. Looking at the author's language, I feel ashamed.

What is written is not realistic at all. Do you know what it is like in reality? Just this and that.

It looks good, but it is developing too fast, many basic technologies have not been perfected, and the span is too big.

I love this book so much and it keeps burning me more and more! I hope the author can keep going!

This book is very well written, very profound, full of hatred, and very exciting! The author is just out of luck, so keep up the good work.

It looks very emotional,

I have a friend who writes novels. He writes two novels a day and was dipped into a cesspool. I just mentioned it for no other reason😏

Have a good trip, Mr. Yuan

Not bad and relatively new

It makes my blood boil

I think this is quite practical, and I hope there will be more high-tech content later.