Puppet*

The pacing at the beginning was slow, and the multiple lines of explanation were a bit confusing. I wanted to add a suspenseful atmosphere, but I was a bit unsure. The rhythm from the back is very good and the ideas are clear. There are too many typos and loopholes in some places, but the idea is quite clever.

The content is compact and written from different perspectives, which is quite good

Human nature is a little twisted