Reborn to Watch You Grow Up

The overall structure of the book is not bad, but there are deficiencies in the logical arrangement of some things and characters. There are many skipped paragraphs in the book. There are serious contradictions in the male protagonist's personality and life. The female protagonist is single-color throughout, which makes the whole book look dull. There is too little interaction between the two parties. There are obvious traces of carelessness in the psychological depiction and shaping of the female protagonist. But thank you to the author for the story. The author has worked hard!

A very good novel, worth following