That Beautiful Stranger Is Actually a Top-Tier Star

The concept is very good, but the character of the innocent white rabbit has turned into a dodder flower. For a sister who has successfully created the same character, I would shout what kind of cute thing it is. The heroine makes me feel more weak. Most of the innocent character created is reflected in the appearance and expression. The innocent white rabbit is just relatively simple and believes that people are good, but they will still fight against bad things in a direct, passionate and unsophisticated way. It is said that the performance of the male protagonist written by the female author is consistent with the author in some aspects. The male protagonist in this article is well portrayed, which shows that the author Baobao is capable of writing good characters. If the heroine could be given some points, the value of this book would increase even more. For example, in the scene with Jiang Tu's girlfriend, the author Baobao mentioned that he cannot prove himself, and the heroine is also avoiding these traps, but her speech is a bit like Da Ru's concubine who can't argue, rather than the real sense of who questions and who gives evidence. The solution to the matter was the appearance of the male protagonist, who didn't even need evidence. He made Jiang's girlfriend laugh with just a few words. After getting in the car, the female protagonist put on an innocent white rabbit expression to thank the male protagonist. Fortunately, this article is still being serialized. I hope the author's baby can make the heroine more independent, more "talkative", braver, and able to solve problems. The baby girl should have more highlights besides her face.

It's very interesting. I saw Chapter 24 and wanted to comment. Before Chapter 24, the male protagonist didn't have much role. I thought Jiang was the male protagonist. I even quit reading the introduction several times. I thought Jiang was pretty good. But by Chapter 26, Jiang had a girlfriend. They had been dating for three years and still provoked the female protagonist. I instantly fell in love with it.

There are very few chapters to begin with, and it keeps skipping chapters. It is not until chapter 32 that the male and female protagonists have a real and shallow interaction. When I read a sweet novel, I really want it to be sweet from beginning to end, so I find it quite bizarre... Why are you fighting the second male lead in the first 32 chapters? It just really has nothing to do with the male protagonist. But I still like the heroine's character, cheerful and generous, with a sense of boundaries. I don't even know if Mr. Jiang is considered the second male lead, but he appears too much and is very gracious. He shows affection to the female protagonist from the beginning and has no sense of boundaries at all. Then I somehow found out that the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist and then decisively assisted me. I really didn't understand this contradictory plot...[Grief][Grief] The e-sports competition part is also very well written and worth reading (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

I've caught up to the latest. The overall plot is good, but there are two people I don't hate, one Zhao and one Jiang. They are both very annoying and made me feel a little nauseous. I hope the heroine will not have too much entanglement with them.

There is a little bit of metaphysical destiny. If it weren't for the erotic dream that the two men dreamed about at the same time, the male and female protagonists might not have crossed paths. The male protagonist's young experience makes him seem to have no ability to perceive happiness, but when he meets the female protagonist and lives happily, he feels that he is at home and at home. The female protagonist makes the male protagonist feel at ease when he is by his side. The heroine is a beautiful and meaningful being, she is sweet and beautiful throughout the whole process.

The writing is so good. Anyway, I am satisfied as a feminist. There are very few faults. Moreover, the psychology of the characters and how they get along with each other are very normal. I really love the heroine. She is a very subjective baby. She is not a cliched e-sports novel or romance. How rare is this? Of course, there is no perfect article. Other reviews also mentioned the part where the heroine's baby was questioned by Zhao. The heroine seemed to have been forced to mute by the plot, as if something wanted to break through the plot limits. There are more than 100 chapters left. I will follow up on whether it is good or not [laughing] I am very satisfied with the writing environment now that I can write such a strong subjective heroine.

The concept and setting of this book are very interesting. Although the author outlines the heroine's intelligence, beauty, simplicity, and great beauty, in some parts she fails to show the corresponding intelligence. From the heroine's modeling work, the Centenary University she was admitted to, and her internship as an operations assistant, it can be seen that the heroine is very smart. So when faced with Zhao's slander and confrontation, the heroine should also respond very rationally, but she let the hero come to save her, relying on his life experience. This is not a good way to solve the problem (readers' tastes vary, but what remains constant is a heroine with a stable core and her own thoughts, rather than not opening her mouth when things can be clearly explained in the text) and the setting of the heroine is a beautiful woman, this setting will This will cause the heroine to be very sensitive to some malice and harassment, because she is beautiful, she is a great beauty, and she will definitely encounter a variety of malice and harassment in the environment where she grew up. Then she should quickly realize when facing Jiang's boundary-blurring behavior. If you want to develop further, you will reject it in a variety of euphemistic or direct ways. It can be thought that the author wants to use Jiang's way to let the male and female protagonists officially know each other. However, I think some of the links between the female protagonist and Jiang and the subsequent quarrels between Zhao and Zhao can be written in a different way. This is just my opinion, the expression may not be clear, just take a look [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I am so satisfied with this book. The heroine is an outsider and has a wanton college youth. She is also very motivated at work. The hero is an e-sports player and is aloof to others, but he is very clingy and straightforward to the heroine. The relationship drama also progresses very quickly. It is a joy to watch. The heroine has a very good character. The hero is a kind of guiding lover with upright views. The author's writing style is also very good and perfect!

Overall it's okay. One thing I like a lot is that it didn't arrange a plot where the male protagonist's relationship was exposed and was attacked by public opinion. The heroine's career was put first. But in the end, I just left a little bit of the interview when the male protagonist won the championship in the World Championship. I think it's good to expand it directly and describe the fans' blessings. It left a little bit and didn't release it, which made me feel a little regretful.

I like the early stages of the male and female protagonists. The female protagonist is great, and the male protagonist is okay. But the male and female protagonists have too many scenes in the first few dozen chapters. The male and female protagonists at the beginning are really okay, but then they suddenly become greasy and have multiple girlfriends. Everything feels weird. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are flat and straightforward. It is not as exciting as the early chapters, but overall it is okay. The female protagonist is great. The first hundred chapters are really okay