Surviving in the Wilderness: I Get a Sign-In System from the Start

Take your own blood. Everyone is welcome to make suggestions and corrections.

The writing is pretty good, just don't make the protagonist too strong or too weak, just medium. I think you suggested cities, city-states, or countries in the later stages of painting.

It's good-looking, but I feel like the main character is a little bit virginal towards women.

Not bad, not bad ( ･᷅ὢ･᷄ )

It seems pretty good so far. You can give it a look. The writing is pretty good, not embarrassing, and quite humorous. It's so boring.

Almost all of these people who are trying to survive are shrewd. This one is a silly idiot. It's quite interesting for a change.

Author, could you put the base there? Inside the vein. , Kill the python first and occupy the mineral vein. Personally, I feel that even if someone steals your home, you can set a trap. The degree of safety is high, at least in the wooden house outdoors.

The deal with that girl was obviously a loss, but I was still so happy. I thought it was a good survival novel, but it turned out to be too frustrating.

Isn't it good to survive and grow stronger? Why do you want a girl and live in a safe house together? Discourage them directly

So far it looks pretty good