Ultraman: Transform into Belial at the Beginning

This is my first time writing an Ultraman novel, so the front may be a little unfamiliar🌚🌚🌝🌝

First of all, this book is good, but the author can slow down the pace a little and describe the details well. For example, when they are fighting, you can't just let them teleport back and subdue the monster. Otvin wants to see this passion, and Beria, what should I say? I suggest you watch a big movie. I think first of all, this character must have a wild and uninhibited feeling. However, I feel that a date will make Beria's character deteriorate. Overall, the material of this book is very good. It's just that I didn't understand it before. Is it Beria who seizes the host, or the host seizes Beria. It may also be because I drove too fast. In short, here are a few points: 1. Slow down the pace and write the fight in more detail. 2. Also, I think something strange about Sero is that the articles are a little bit uncirculated. We can pursue quality instead of speed. 3. Beria had better not have such a thing as dating with the heroine, because what you write seems to be like a traveler and adventurer. At this time, we need to show that you want to help people, 4. The foreshadowing should be buried and the readers should be left in suspense. Fortunately, I feel like you gave Uub a little less of a role. Actually, Uub is not stupid, he is just a little naive. I think he should have known her identity a long time ago.

Not bad, the protagonist actually traveled through time and became the Ultra villain: Beria. The story of the battle between the Ultra Universe and the Warrior of Light is also a good fan novel about Bei Laohei. It is also a novel about ultra dark villains, which is very rare.

It's pretty good-looking, but I don't know if it's a dark style

If the author has a female protagonist, please indicate it in the brief description. If you don't have anything to say, please explain that this book is very well written. I'm looking forward to the next game

This book can't be said to be average. It's really good at the beginning, but a bit off at the end. Anyway, in other words, I want to know if there will be a follow-up after the protagonist takes over the Kingdom of Light? I think we can go to other universes, such as the prehistoric era, and bring the three heroes to fight the three Qing Dynasties. The scene is exciting just thinking about it.

I feel that the overall quality is very good, but the appearance rate of muscular men is a bit too low. . . .

It's very beautiful. Come take a look. 😘😘

Very cool! Come on, author!

It just feels good-looking

Just a few words are beautiful.

That's not right. The author says that Belial's name in the front is Hypa, Death Scythe, and how come it's Hypa and Jetton in the back?

Between the white clouds and the sky toward the sky, The clown is actually next to me. The dilapidated house sat up in shock, with its head bowed. The clown turned out to be myself.

Cowhide cowhide is so awesome that I doubt my life

I read it and it was really good! Author, please keep working hard, I will always support you.

It's not bad, but the front is a bit unsightly and the back is very nice. If you don't want to watch Uub's part like dating, just skip it.

I like you very much, and I wish you a belated happy birthday.

Come on, don't finish it and keep writing.

It's pretty cool, come on!

I hope the author is creating great work.

It's very good. I hope the author's next book can continue the world view of this book.

It's very good, but the ending is not ideal!

Come on, the author, I look forward to your wonderful work.

I feel like this Ultraman is very good

Come on, the author can

Beria said I am, not my uncle, so powerful

Very good, the plot is quite interesting

Not bad, not bad, really good

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful^ω^

So awesome and pretty!