Urban Space Mage

Don't write that the protagonist looks like a child who hasn't grown up.

Hao Wu Luo Ji, the protagonist is useless

What the hell are you writing! I can't even understand it, the main character is a loser

There's something wrong with the logic. The protagonist's emotions are driven by the story. Whatever emotions the plot requires, the protagonist has whatever emotions they have. It's like an essay, not a novel.

That's ridiculous, no logic

There is no logic at all. Every paragraph is full of nonsense.

The writing is so rubbish

There is no such thing as independence, it is like being swept away by a flood, and readers need the protagonist to be the wave. People are no longer able to control themselves in life. Will they want to do it again when reading novels? The protagonist is obviously very capable, but he does not live independently. He cannot improve his own abilities with peace of mind, so he has to humble himself and seek development from others.

I looked at a few and it felt so childish and messy.

Weird feeling

The protagonist is poisonous and the author is also poisonous

There are too many rubbish works nowadays!

Cheating, yes, or being beaten by cheating

That's outrageous. Why do you want to include a mage setting? Even if you write a normal urban novel, it won't be sprayed by everyone who comes in.