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Here is a small suggestion. I found a small foreshadowing when I was watching. If one person uploads Arthur's data, does that mean that others can also play in the future? There can be more of this, otherwise those heroes will not change and they will be very capable. Also, you can create a few new heroes or link them with other heroes, such as traditional swordsmanship or macho physical training.

Why choose Meng Tian? In that era where all the heroes were Blue Moon, it was hard to think of a Kai or something who wouldn't overwhelm everyone.

When I saw Chapter 14, I saw that some of the comments were about Zhou Jing coming out, so I gave up. I don't think it's okay, but this is a bit, that, hurts the IQ. If it weren't for that woman, there wouldn't be so much shit┐(─__─)┌

It's okay, but the emotional scene at the beginning is a bit too horrible to watch. I wonder if there will be someone else who can use the hero from King of Kings later on.

Well, the writing is quite good, but the emotions are a bit complicated, and it feels a bit like Long Aotian.

Small suggestions: The punishments in the live-action version should be more severe, such as actors, hanging up and escaping, and proficiency and crystal stones can be deducted. Proficiency When it is difficult to obtain crystal stones!

This is the first time I have seen a book like yours, so I won't say more. My backhand is a five-star

Yes, I suggest using a character from other games, like the Hell-blooded Demon God in DNF.

For the time being, it's pretty good except for the relationship scene. Also I want to ask a question. That is: the author does not seem to have set the number of skills in the settings (in my impression, there is no set number. It may be that the author updated it too slowly and I forgot the previous plot🐶). In this case. I will go directly to the DNF characters. Level 15 means fifteen skill points. In the later stage, people can even doubt their lives. If nothing else, the creator of DNF's field of vision is the attack range. The virtual game should be in first person. In the later stage, wouldn't it be beautiful to stand directly on the tower in the middle and see the crystals and springs on the opposite side? O((*^▽^*))o

I suggest the author write some characters from other games. (Don't spray if you don't like it)

Please write Lan, "Lan, it's just a code name."

The proposal is not to just write about King, LOL, Heroic Soul Blade, 300, Call of Time and Space, and the decisive battle in Heianjing. Or the author, you can learn from the Naruto mobile game. The important thing is that he is a game, and real games can turn into women. Mulan, Akali. There are also sword demons, lion dogs, and giant insects. How you write it is up to you. I only read half of it and I felt a little tired. You have to bring yourself into the role of the protagonist. If you think about where you are going, there will definitely be a strong one who can reduce the dimensionality and hit them until they can no longer take care of themselves.

It's not bad so far, but the protagonist's heroes are not unique to him, which means that other people can also obtain the skills of these heroes, which is just a little uncomfortable.

Use some heroes from the jungle or top lane, I feel like that would look better. Come on, author!

It's still barely watchable, but I don't really recommend it.

Come on, author, this book is beautiful and worth reading. Well, there are a little few words. The author greatly improved his writing.

The protagonist's original universe game is not good. If you think of a few lol heroes, wouldn't it be more NPC? For example, Xiaofa, or Dogou, plus the real world can inherit the skills of heroes. If these two heroes were in reality, they would kill ants or insects all the time. In the end, who would be able to match them. Keep stacking and become invincible.

It's a bit awesome!

How to say it? It's an insult to my intelligence.

Very good, keep up the good work

Very well written, keep up the good work.

Hope this book. The more you write, the better.

Are you interested? Consider Yuan Ge. As long as he's handsome, that's it.

Actually, overall it's pretty good.

Okay, okay, okay, five stars out of habit

Can the author write some shooters, or junglers with strong explosiveness, so that it looks enjoyable?

I hope it will be updated soon. It's very good-looking. I've encountered many good-looking ones, but they were all because of slow updates. I deleted them and gave them a star by the way.

Very good, this subject has finally emerged, and I am very optimistic about this book. The author has a small suggestion: be more detailed in the characters' battles.

Yes, it looks good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

The writing is quite beautiful, but the updates are too slow. When I see the wonderful things, they are gone, which makes me sad to be honest.