Invincibility Starts with a Crane

Let's talk about your feelings after reading a few chapters! The writing style is too immature, it feels like it is written by a student, and the plot is too fluid and there is not much connection between the previous and the following chapters, which made me confused while reading it. The novel itself is okay, but the author's writing is not good. I hope the author can work harder. Goodbye~

The realm is so messy. I broke through in this chapter and then failed to break through after a few chapters. The realm is messy and the devouring value is also the same. I released a task to reward the devouring value, but there is no reward after the task is completed. Is it amnesia? The plot of the book cannot be written well, which makes me suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder. The subject matter of the book is very good. The author's writing level is limited and the book cannot be written. The readers can't stand it and read things that affect their mood, leaving them speechless and messy.

It's a bit disgusting. At first, he said that the saint Ziyu was the Yuan Dan mirror, and twice he broke through the Yuan Dan in the secret realm. The realm was so chaotic. He also said that he could help Ziyu win 200,000 yuan. Where is that? Also, if he doesn't use the experience he has gained to make breakthroughs, how can he save it for long-term interest? It's really not worth looking at.

NⅰceO(∩_∩)O's writing is very good, but the back part is so exciting! ! ! !