Omniscient*****

Yes, I personally think this book is very good. The content is very good and I like it very much😍.

As for the heroine, personally, Su Ling'er is not suitable to be a single heroine at this stage, mainly because of her personality. Maybe the author prefers Xiaojiabiyu, who is gentle and graceful, so the Su Ling'er described is more distinctive, and the rest needs work. I feel like I have tried my best if I can give it four stars. After reading it now, I can feel that this is the author's first time writing. Keep up the good work.

I don't want to have multiple systems. There isn't one yet. If there were, I would lose one star and leave.

Supplement: I think the protagonist can be more decisive in killing. After all, who is a killer who is not ruthless? In the world of killers, everyone is in danger. The world of killers is about the law of the jungle and the survival of the fittest. Also, although the sweet CP between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is good, the progress will be too fast, but it is acceptable. However, the overall pattern is too fast, that is, the plot is too fast, and the system is not useful or the protagonist will not use it. It can obviously enhance the strength but you don't use it. You don't want to rely on it, but you can use it to become stronger. Pills, body tempering, and understanding of laws are all fine. Moreover, the progress of the protagonist's strength is a bit slow. The skills can also be summarized in a unified way. For example, the more useful ones can be listed together to let the audience know. That's it for now, I will continue to express my thoughts later.

It's okay, I actually wanted to give it a 2, but it's just for the sake of it. . . I won't deduct too much from the manuscript, but I'll still give you a five-star rating. Stop writing brainstorming articles, use your brain more, think from someone else's perspective, put yourself in the reader's position, don't be too subjective, be objective.

It's a good book, but there are not many people. Keep writing and don't give up. I have your back.

Keep up the good work, author

Come on, author! Great article!

It feels okay, keep going (っ◕‿◕)っ

The needle is good, the needle is good, it is quite interesting, it is different from the general system text, the plot is pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

I just want to have fun in another world, hahaha, support the author!

Although there are some flaws, the flaws are not concealed. . The setting and story are both good. . Five-star supports multiple updates, maybe there will be unexpected surprises?

I like it, cheers for the author!

The needle doesn't prick it, it's so beautiful.

It's really exciting

Support! Support! Come on!

It looks pretty cool. I'll give it five stars.

Five-star support. I've read more than forty chapters. It's really good.

I'll give it four stars first. It's pretty unflattering.