The Beginning of the Prehistoric Era, Tearing up the List of Gods

In fact, as far as I'm concerned, as long as the author doesn't write too much, this book will definitely become a hit. The world view is vast and the writing is pretty good, not too bad.

I have always liked Tongtian in the prehistoric era, because this eldest brother is really reckless and the most approachable. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง five stars

A super interesting book that makes Zhu Bajie look in the mirror and see that he is not a human being. Hahahaha(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

The plot of this book is okay, but it has a lot of minor flaws, so I give it 3.5 Stars. Three stars is too strict, four stars is too much, and five stars is impossible. Let me tell you in detail. There is nothing wrong with the big plot. After all, it doesn't matter whether the author writes Nuwa and Taishang as good or bad people. This is the author's way of writing. However, there are still some problems in reading the book. They are all minor problems and are innocuous, but they make it very uncomfortable for readers. Here are some examples: ① Title problem. In the full text, the apprentice calls him master instead of calling him master, respected master, or master. Instead, he calls him "Master Headmaster" and "Master Headmaster" behind his back, which makes the disciple act like a boy. ②It's still a question of title. The author of the full text is my uncle. I can't tell the difference. I can't tell the difference between my uncle and my uncle. I'm just yelling nonsense. ③Seniority issue. There are so many people in Jie Jiao that the author can't figure out which ones are the second generation and which are the third generation disciples. Sometimes the seniority is confused, and he still yells nonsense. I hope all the authors in Anhuang can understand the interval between [the second generation disciples of Xuanmen] and [the second generation disciples of Jie Jiao]. There is a generational difference. ④Where does Yuanshi Tianzun live? One time, East Kunlun, another time West Kunlun, and another time East Kunlun [Of course I know that Yuan Shi should live in East Kunlun, and West Kunlun is the territory of the Queen Mother of the West, but the author not only wrote blindly, but also changed it back and forth] ⑤In one chapter, the system gives a choice. Choose one to be rewarded with Pangu's Sky-Opening Ax, and choose two to be rewarded with the God-killing Robbery. The author wrote this (here is just a rough description, not the original text verbatim) Tongtian has the Sky-Opening Ax. You can't do anything to Hongjun. Once Tongtian has the God-killing Robbery, even Hongjun must face it cautiously [the word cautious is the original text]. Why, the out-of-print weapon Sky-Opening Ax is not as good as the standard weapon of your army of time-travelers? One is an out-of-print weapon, and the other is a standard weapon (doge).

There was a man next door who traveled through time and took over Tongtian, but he was slapped to death by Tongtian. Tongtian also inherited his memory and system.

There can be a female protagonist who is not as aggrieved as the one next door who obliterates the true nature of men. It is obvious that she is a time traveler who has turned herself into an emotionless eunuch.

I didn't read many novels at first, but suddenly I discovered that this one is quite good. It's just that the author sometimes makes a lot of typos, but overall it's still a good book. 😁

This book is very comfortable to read, although there are still some problems with the realm of some people, such as the quasi-sage of Ran Deng. I think it should be Da Luo. Like Zhao Gongming, I also agree with the opening of other world maps. As a system traveler, it is impossible to watch the prehistoric world getting weaker and weaker. In my opinion, all living beings only know how to take and do not know the reward. This is the reason why the prehistoric world is getting weaker and weaker. If you can give back, that would be good. Doesn't look good from behind

The author's writing style is very delicate, and each character's character is perfectly shaped, especially the protagonist's pattern, which is not limited to a moment of grudges or a period of great famine. This is very attractive. The transition is natural. People are not necessarily black and white. If you are bad for a moment, you will be a bad person in all aspects. During the Conferred God Period, Yuan Shi had a grudge against each other, but in fact, for them, it was only a blink of an eye, and they would still reconcile afterward. It's good to write it from a tender perspective, the atmosphere is very relaxed, and it's not tiring to read even though it has some exciting parts. The novel portrays Honghuang from another angle. Tongtian is ruthless and protective of his shortcomings. He is timid when he should be cowardly, and he is arrogant when he should be. This is very good. I have read many such novels, and this one is a more tender and delicate ancient novel. Highly recommended for old book lovers. The above is the five-star evaluation I gave before reading more than 240 chapters. Later I decided to take back the five-star rating. After two hundred chapters, the author begins to write down the story. The protagonist only appears occasionally, and he begins to describe other characters in large chapters. The protagonist even begins to make frequent remarks about the villain seeking death.

The beginning of this book is quite interesting. I started skipping to the middle of Baolian Lantern. How should I put it? After Baolian Lantern, I lost consciousness and no longer had the feeling of light up. I dug a hole but couldn't fill it. I give 5 stars to the first chapter of Baolian Lantern.

It's a pretty good Honghuangliu novel with novel themes. It doesn't make me want to read it like other novels, but the world view is a bit too big. I'm curious about Tongtian's system.

Not bad, I didn't think it was anything, but it's quite interesting

The overall language is quite good, but you should know more about Honghuang, right? Maybe you are a changed person, but of course you are not exclusive of this.

Very very very satisfied🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵 🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵 🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵 🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵🈵

After the Pangu Axe, there are three parts: 1. Tai Chi Diagram, 2. Pangu Flag, and 3. Chaos Bell. It's not the Donghuang Bell. Donghuang Bell is the name changed by Donghuang Taiyi to Chaos Bell. But Tongtian cannot use the name Donghuang Bell.

I stopped at Chapter 283, and the writing was very good. The Great Wedding can be seen as the end of a book, a complete prehistoric world. After the wedding, the fusion of the Lotus Lantern world began, and Journey to the West began to involve time-travelers. At first, it was interesting that the protagonists of Tang Monk were all time-travelers, but later on they were all time-travelers and systems. For the time being, it can be regarded as another article. Journey to the West is all about time-travelers. The author's thinking is quite broad and worth reading.

Super pretty\(//∇//)\ Although the plot is somewhat different from other prehistoric novels -_-|| But the plot is tight and the story is perfect It's really a good book

Sometimes the setting is not very rigorous, but it can still be given to those who are not interested in reading.

The opening Zhongshan chapter is okay! The ending is a bit anxious

I don't watch much, but I always listen.

The key is that he is still strong, even Guangchengzi, the head of the Twelve Golden Immortals of the Chan Sect, has to kneel down when he comes. Jin'ao Island, Biyou Palace. Because Tongtian valued Nezha very much, he naturally left a trace of his spiritual thoughts in Chentangguan for a long time. Seeing this scene, he couldn't help but laugh, feeling very relieved. After all, he came from time travel and didn't know much about the personalities of the various Jie Jiao disciples. Now he knew for the first time that Wu Yunxian turned out to be such a character. Interesting! As long as the teachings fail, he will be happy! , "The four direct disciples, the ten accompanying immortals, Kong Xuan and the three deputy leaders of Ran Deng and Lu Ya, the third generation disciples Yu Yuan, the Holy Mother of Fire Spirit, etc., The fourth generation disciples Hu Lei, Ji Li, Yu Qing, etc., The outer sect elite disciples Zhao Gongming, the Sanxiao sisters, the Four Saints of Kowloon Island, the Ten Heavenly Lords of Jinli Island, Shi Ji, Luo Xuan, Lu Yue, Hong Jin, etc." "Everyone, please get ready and take advantage of this period to handle things on the island. We may go to war at any time." As Tong Tian opened his mouth, everyone quickly bowed in response. Although everyone in Jiejiao attaches great importance to the Great Tribulation of the Gods, they actually have no fear at all. Because they are too powerful. Now half of the twelve golden immortals of the Chan Sect have been killed, the deputy leader Ran Deng has joined the Jie Sect, and there are even two or three big cats and kittens of the Western Sect. Not to mention the addition of two top quasi-sages, Kong Xuan and Lu Ya.

Although it is said that many of the author's settings are wrong, I wonder if the author doesn't know or just wants to come up with his own ideas? But I have to say that this novel is really good and worth reading.

It's so good. It really tells the story of the Saint Tongtian who was replaced by a person and changed his fate against the will of heaven.

At first, I really didn't expect so many systems to pop up at once. The author is very imaginative and there is also a foreshadowing that is buried deep. I think it won't collapse later. The plot connection is very smooth and does not appear to be abrupt. The writing is still good.

I've read almost 300 chapters and I think the writing is pretty good. If the author is more serious and works hard on every chapter, this book will definitely become popular.

The author's writing is wonderful. The world view of the book is huge. It is not like the usual prehistoric novels which are limited to prehistoric times and chaos. I hope the author will work hard💪

Very good. It's worth reading, the author's writing is quite good.

I have been divorced for so many years, but I found you here. You are doing well, so I feel relieved. My child is in the third grade. His grades have always been very good and he has been first in the class for three consecutive years. Even though his personality is like yours, the child doesn't ask where his father is! If you have a chance, come back and see your child (I want to cheat)

Actually, I don't know how to put it. It means that when you are invincible, you realize that you are also someone else's pawn.

Yu Hua, Yang Jian, and Nezha should be called Senior Brother Wen Zhong.