Yan tide was staring at the screen during the Double Eleven shopping spree. Unexpectedly, a wave of electricity ran through her body and directly took her soul away.
After experiencing a roller coaster speed, Yan tide arrived in another world with her mobile phone.
This is Fengming Country, and the customs and customs are similar to those in ancient times.
As the most disliked concubine in the Yan family, Yan tide plans to be self-reliant.
One day, when he saw the wife of the Taishi Mansion showing off the jade ring she was wearing, Yan tide mercilessly bought a two-carat diamond ring, which shone in the audience.
One day, a man's face was dry and flaky, so Yan tide took out a newly arrived facial mask and applied it directly to him.
Unexpectedly, this facial mask actually turned out to be my husband...
Reader comments
The plot content and character creation are all good. I hope the author can strengthen the characters and other aspects.
First: The heroine is very holy. She was bullied by her family and her status was low, but she didn't resist. I don't know if it's because I didn't pay attention carefully, or if it's not explained in the play. I don't know when the heroine traveled through time. If she came recently, the heroine said during the conversation with her parents that she doesn't care about everything that happened. I want to ask you that you are not the original owner. What position do you take to decide the original owner's affairs? If you traveled through time as a child, you wouldn't feel that there was anything wrong and it would be hard to say anything.
Second: After all, the heroine has traveled through time. Can she be a little ambitious? She also tells the hero about the functions of the mobile phone. You must know that you are not familiar with each other at the beginning. Later, the hero wants to be with the heroine. Why can't the heroine be stronger? Isn't it good to develop your career well? You neither refuse nor agree, can't you make it clearer?
Third: After all, you have a system. You can develop your own connections to make money on your own, and be separated from your family. After watching more than a third of it, I still feel that it is a literary struggle with my family. It is so frustrating, especially when there are several women who bully the heroine. The hero is kind enough to help her get revenge, and the heroine wants to forget it. It is really not worth it.
(Expressing my own opinions, nothing else. I wish the author will write better and better)
How can I put it, the writing is good, but it is really frustrating. Every few chapters, she is framed, spread rumors, and targeted and bullied in various ways. Although she strives for her own strength and is not the Holy Mother, there are a lot of bad things, and it is really frustrating to watch. I really feel like half of this article is about the troublesome stories of intrigues and frame-ups.
The plot content and character creation are all good. I hope the author can strengthen the characters and other aspects. First: The heroine is very holy. She was bullied by her family and her status was low, but she didn't resist. I don't know if it's because I didn't pay attention carefully, or if it's not explained in the play. I don't know when the heroine traveled through time. If she came recently, the heroine said during the conversation with her parents that she doesn't care about everything that happened. I want to ask you that you are not the original owner. What position do you take to decide the original owner's affairs? If you traveled through time as a child, you wouldn't feel that there was anything wrong and it would be hard to say anything. Second: After all, the heroine has traveled through time. Can she be a little ambitious? She also tells the hero about the functions of the mobile phone. You must know that you are not familiar with each other at the beginning. Later, the hero wants to be with the heroine. Why can't the heroine be stronger? Isn't it good to develop your career well? You neither refuse nor agree, can't you make it clearer? Third: After all, you have a system. You can develop your own connections to make money on your own, and be separated from your family. After watching more than a third of it, I still feel that it is a literary struggle with my family. It is so frustrating, especially when there are several women who bully the heroine. The hero is kind enough to help her get revenge, and the heroine wants to forget it. It is really not worth it. (Expressing my own opinions, nothing else. I wish the author will write better and better)
How can I put it, the writing is good, but it is really frustrating. Every few chapters, she is framed, spread rumors, and targeted and bullied in various ways. Although she strives for her own strength and is not the Holy Mother, there are a lot of bad things, and it is really frustrating to watch. I really feel like half of this article is about the troublesome stories of intrigues and frame-ups.