From Check-In Mall to Ruling the Football World

The writing was very messy. When I read Chapter 6, the protagonist changed teams while playing in a training match. It felt like I was suddenly in another novel.

I didn't understand it, I was totally confused. If you don't know how to write, don't write. I simply couldn't stand it any longer, so I retreated immediately.

I felt sick reading this book. How did seven point nine come about?

It's a bit messy! I don't know what to look at at all