I,*******

Why do you have the same name as your neighbor? 

The timeline in the front is a bit messy, but the logic behind it is very strong and the characters are full of personality. It's worth watching.

It belongs to me, I'm afraid you won't be able to hold it if I give it to you

Why don't you change the author? Don't care about other people's opinions. We love reading it.

That's awesome, so fucking funny.

Not bad, good, tastes great

It's okay. Keep up the good work, author.

Keep up the good work, it's okay

Not bad, keep up the good work

Generally speaking, it's pretty good, but the timeline needs to be fine-tuned.