The Author Is Invincible

I think the subject matter is very novel and the content is very interesting, but I feel that there are too many useless things. For example, there are too many situations other than characters, and there are too many supporting roles.

The writing style is a bit immature and a bit nonsensical. I don't know if you like it or not. Anyway, I don't like it very much. Seeing as the author has worked very hard, I'll give it four stars! It's good to help the author. He should add a better-looking cover and change the title to a better one! This is more attractive

Very nice to look at.

There are too many explanatory texts. In fact, novels should be like TV series and rely on dialogue between characters to explain the background.

It feels like it's been three chapters, and I have no idea what to write about…

The idea was quite interesting, but the writing didn't convey the flavor. The main reason is that the process of the protagonist begging for death feels like a person high on drugs. It lacks some agility and is too pretentious.