
There's Something Wrong with the Male Protagonist of the Book of Passing
穿书之男主他不对劲
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I just read a little bit of it, and I thought it was pretty good, but when I read the comments that it would be very sad later on, I felt a little panicked as someone who only reads sweet articles.
At that time, I was watching with great interest, and the rating box popped up. The backhand was five stars, bang, very quickly. I have a lot to say about how beautiful it is, but I have to read a novel and don't have time to comment, so I shut it down again.
Wall crack recommended! It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking Danmei article. I really like it. I like Chu Yunzhou's tsundere-ness with a tough mouth but a soft heart, and I like Lu Hanying who is cold on the outside but warm on the inside, affectionate and dedicated. I love this two-way love affair. Although Zhouzhou has not admitted it so far, he has already fallen in love with the Hanying in front of him. His Hanying is different from others. He can make Zhouzhou rely on and trust him wholeheartedly. The name he calls out every time he is in danger or even unconscious is - Lu Hanying. Whenever he is in danger, what he worries most about is Han Ying's safety. Even though he knows that he has the aura of the protagonist, he still doesn't want to see him hurt and sad. Nothing is more important to Zhouzhou than Lu Hanying in his heart. Yes, he had fallen in love with Lu Hanying before he knew it or didn't dare to notice it. Even though Han Ying is always jealous, has low self-esteem and is heart-wrenching, he feels more sorry for the boy in his heart. The young master he protects with his life will never allow anyone to hurt him, not even himself! All his double standards have been given to Zhouzhou, and his tenderness will only be towards Zhouzhou. As long as the young master wants it, he will do it at all costs, because he does not want to let his young master down, and his young master deserves all the good things in the world! I believe that in the near future, they will be able to love each other openly. Wait until Zhouzhou faces up to his love for Han Ying, wait until Han Ying no longer feels inferior, wait until they untie their knots, reveal their hearts to each other, and have no more secrets... They will definitely be able to be together forever! Thank you author, I like your story very much, keep up the good work!
Ahhhhhhhhhh... So sweet, sweet but not greasy, I really love it, I like reading this kind of book. It would be better if there was more yellow, hahahaha... Hey (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia
Looks good! How can I not comment on such a beautiful novel? It's so cruel that my little heart is trembling. I hope the author can send some sweets👀✨. I hope you can keep up the good work! And Happy New Year!
It is really a very good Danmei novel, with a beginning and an end, a fresh story, real feelings, and a cause and effect. It created a perfect world, but it's a pity that the extras are missing. 😂😂😂
Very beautiful! Real!ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ Ahhh! The writing is very good, the plot has ups and downs, it is super sweet at times, but sometimes it makes me cry. The characters are created very well. I like Zhouzhou very much! Thank you so much for bringing me such an interesting article (☆∀☆)!
Although the title is very ordinary, it is really super cool! ! The plot is really, really full, and this is the second book I've read that I found very enjoyable to fill in! ! And the emotional line is also super... Well... It's sad and sweet at the same time. I cried and laughed at the same time (damn it). I really want a comic about Han Ying and Zhou Zhou to be published one day... (I started to think about Han Ying's design...
The writing is really good, and the plot is also very unexpected. The development of the plot tightly grasped my little heart, making me love and hate the characters in the article. This is enough to prove the seriousness of the author in writing, thank you so much ^0^~
I really like this kind of two-way relationship. Although it is a bit sadistic in the process, most of it is still funny, or can you say pickled sugar in the knife? ? The most important thing is that there are no gaps or misunderstandings (if there are any, they are resolved immediately). They are both "worthless" people in their relationship and they trust each other. It's really YYDS. I love them so much. I love the phrase "little master, his little master" so much. It's so cool. It's just that the extra is too short and not enough to watch.
It would be great if there could be a modern side story with the main CP, the ending felt so unexpected! Wake up in the modern age! Give us a sweet love. After all, Zhouzhou has been waiting for a sweet love for a long time [almost crying]
Damn it (*`へ´*), this book really whetted my appetite! The characters are full and three-dimensional, and some unique details are also well described. This shows that the author's writing style is very good (∂ω∂) (/≧▽≦/) Awesome! I love you so much. Author Da Da ヽ(*´з`*)ノ
Let me tell you, this book is super good. I was a little bit sad to read it after reading it for so long and it suddenly ended. And those who say it is cruel, I tell you they are all lies, you have to believe it. It's just like Donggong, it's obviously a sweet little drama, isn't it? There are a lot of melons, especially at the back, which makes your saliva flow out of the corners of your eyes unconsciously😈
Woohoo, I finished reading another book. This book is very interesting both in the early and late stages, but there was a part in the middle that made me super uncomfortable. I feel sorry for Qingyun God of War, I feel sorry for Mo Qingrou, I feel sorry for Jiu Xi and his wife, I feel sorry for Liu Aluan... The emotional line between the protagonists in the early and late stages was good, but in the middle, they tortured a lot of people and implicated a lot of people, such as Qingyun God of War. Later on, I actually felt that they were too willful for the sake of feelings. But overall it's still good-looking. I really like Jiuxi a lot, but it's such a pity for them. Although the last extra chapter seems to have left a mark, it still can't make up for the sadness I felt when No. 9 Disappeared [crying]
The author's writing is quite good, and he has a good grasp of the protagonist's emotional changes and the male protagonist's thoughts and feelings. And the character of the protagonist is also the kind that I like better. In fact, I don't really like reading system novels. The main reason is that the system restricts the protagonist too much and punishes the protagonist for failing to complete tasks. But I think No. 9 Is really good to the protagonist, so it doesn't seem like there is too much burden on the protagonist. He wants the protagonist to follow his own ideas. I've only watched a third of it now, and I feel it's pretty good. I just hope that the male protagonist can quickly take control of his body. I feel particularly bitter when I see the male protagonist being nice to the female protagonist. The female protagonist is really annoying. I feel that she obviously doesn't understand anything, is pretending to be a good person, and uses this ignorance to hurt the people around her. I also hope that the protagonist will soon see the hero's true love for him. Hey, hey, he will definitely be with the hero in the end anyway! Just what are Lu Hanying and Zuo Chen going to do...
It's so beautiful, sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo more more...""
The two main characters are so sweet! The feeling of rushing to each other and trusting each other's lives is beautiful. Zhouzhou was miserable when he was a child, and so was Zuo. The two were really a match made in heaven and redeemed each other. The supporting characters are also very full, and everyone has a sense of soul. The two villains really turned out to be innocent without realizing it. They looked bad at first, but they both had reasons and humanity. If they had different experiences, they would be good people. It's just that there are too few extras. I really want to see Zhouzhou and Zuo's daily life after they return555555555
This is a book with two male protagonists. The tough male protagonist Lu Hanying was born in misery and his father did not care for his mother. The other male protagonist Chu Yunzhou traveled through the book and saved Lu Hanying. In the end, the two lived happily in the real world!
It's really good-looking, but there are some parts that are really sadistic and really offend me. I really didn't dare to look back. It makes me cry every time I read the novel these days. The text is good. Except for the protagonist who is a little bit like a virgin at times, it is really a good novel. I recommend it!
Highly recommended. The path of this relationship is really ups and downs. Sometimes I really hate things that have to be done. However, the two male protagonists are very smart and there are not too many misunderstandings. Everyone and every story has a very bad ending.
This is the only book that is not rated five stars. There is a plot in the middle that is particularly uncomfortable to read. It is about closing Shangguan Changxue (the original heroine). I won't go into details. It is really difficult to understand the chapters written by the author. The previous plot is quite interesting. In fact, I highly recommend watching it. It's just that I have some personal friction, so I don't give it full marks. However, this plot is really recommended. The writing elsewhere is very good, but I still can't be happy with this character at the moment.
It's really beautiful. I watched it all day long, and it's now two o'clock in the morning the next day. Although it's a bit cruel in the middle, please note that it's just a little bit, but it's super sweet at the end and will satisfy you with a happy ending! ! ! ! Go ahead, Jimeis! ! !
I have read a lot of pure love stories recently, and I am very interested in this one. The early pitfalls can be filled in later. The process of the two male protagonists is a little bit sadistic. Really only one point. The ending is very happy, but it is a bit rushed at the end. The most surprising thing is that No. 9 Did not disappear and got a body. I didn't expect it to be given to Chu Xi. Since it is my own energy body, I didn't expect that No. 9 As a system would actually give birth to its own consciousness and have human emotions. Everyone in the article has a happy ending, which is very beautiful.
The sugar is really sweet, and the knife is really heart-piercing (´థ౪థ)σ (I saw Lu Hanying taking Chu Yunzhou back to Luoxue City, and I felt uncomfortable)
This novel is very good. Here I saw the hard-won love in the real society and the bumpy road of this love becoming a fruition. There are many characters along the way that made me uncomfortable, such as Jiu Mei, also known as System No. 9. His responsibility on this road Ren is very important. He slowly fell in love with Yunzhou along the way. He began to shift the focus to Yunzhou instead of the main system. In the end, he disappeared in order to save Yunzhou. This is really hard for me to forgive, but fortunately the author of the extra chapter made up for this regret.
Looks good, really looks good. Every character is very vivid, the story line is clear, and the author's writing is very good. Even if I don't give it a five-star review, I can't bear it in my conscience. Although Liu Yunshen's ending made me feel a little pitiful, it could be regarded as atonement for his previous actions. Then there are Chu Xi and No. 9. No. 9 Is really heartbreaking. I don't know if that little fool is No. 9. If not, I will be really sad! All in all, this is a very nice book, really! Hehe~
It's very interesting. This is one of the best novels I've read so far. DaDa's writing style is really good and it won my heart. I actually saw this article on other software. Of course, I have already finished the article. I didn't expect to see this novel on Tomato one day. I'm really excited. I will follow DaDa decisively. Lu Hanying and Chu Yunzhou wish you more and more happiness!
It's very unsexy. When I watched it, I seemed to be involved in it. No matter what other people said, it touched my heart anyway. I happen to like to watch this kind of sadism. I hope the author will not let other people's words affect the plot and just follow what he wants. It's very well written. I feel like the author has experienced it 😂 As for why I gave it four stars, it's because I didn't watch enough. When will it be finished and when will it be changed back to five stars 😉
It's more beautiful, but the comments say it's a bit cruel at the end, I'm afraid my heart won't be able to bear it ლ(́◐╯ω╰◐‵ლ) Hug
The plot and plot of this book are very good, and the holes dug have been buried. Overall, I think this book is well written, and I sincerely recommend everyone to read it. ——Recommendation from a midnight book hunter