The First Phoenix Concubine Conquers the World

It's okay, but there are too many typos and the heroine's name is wrong.

Overall it's pretty good, I just feel like the male lead doesn't pay as much to the female lead as the second male lead.

It's okay. There are too many mistakes in the names of the characters, including the names of the male and female protagonists. Moreover, I feel that the writing of the male protagonist is not as much as that of the second male protagonist. Does the male protagonist pay as much as the second male protagonist?

It looks good, but there are a lot of typos 😂😂😂😂😂

It looks good, but there are too many dividing lines.

When I read this book, I spent half the time imagining it. There are too many typos, but it's quite interesting. Comrades who don't mind a lot of typos can read it to relieve their boredom. It's quite good.

Jumping off, very jumping off, ordinary people can't see it, and the average person can't see it either

The writing is incoherent. Mess

Well enough. There are just too many typos. The author would like to encourage you to learn more! Try to avoid typos in the future!

The writing is very good, the storyline is exciting, I like it

Is there a sequel to my Shangguan Chengmo 😂😂

Not bad, it took two days to finish.

The plot is okay, but there are too many typos! ! !

Lots of typos, overall good

What about Narcissus? A bit rushed

It looks good, I just like how modern people travel back in time to torture dogs in ancient times👏👏👏👏👏

There are too many typos in the names, and the endings of Blue Narcissus and Na Lengsha were not written out.

It doesn't look good, it's messy

It's okay, just a little fluttery

Very good, highly recommended