I Can Retrieve Treasures From Books

In the early stage, twelve talismans, devil fruits for sale, dragon balls, battle suits and armors, etc. Are all good.

The author's pace is too fast. The fun of being an ordinary person who just discovered abilities in the early stage is all gone. The second person with super powers appears so quickly. I should write slowly. First, one person has the ability to show his status among ordinary people. I have written all the points that can be written, and then introduce a wider world.

Anything can be done, it's just too confusing! Sometimes he is an old man, sometimes he is a clown, and many of the plots have an inexplicable feeling.

This title is for nothing. The author is a newbie, I have never written a novel before. After reading a few books, I thought I could write a novel, but you are far from it.

The title of the book is good, let's start with five words⭐, I hope I'm not crazy! The logic doesn't make sense, the details aren't dealt with very well, and it still feels a bit like two coins! It's okay if you don't have a brain-dead end at the end. You can still read it in Shuhuang! There's poison in the back! I'm not strong enough! I slipped away (￢_￢)

The writing is very good, keep it up ^ω^ The various memes are well integrated, I hope you will continue to work hard, no, eunuch

I still have to give it one star. As far as I'm concerned, his zero stars don't even count. What he writes is completely inaccurate. Don't just take some junk stuff from a good thing.

Haha, 3 stars. All I can say is that the more I read this book, the more confused I became. I don't know if I will continue to read this book in the future. Hehehe😵😵😵😵😵😵😵 😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵 😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵

This article is a no-brainer article. It starts out invincible and then keeps causing trouble. It is very interesting and I recommend everyone to read it. Finally, I want to say something, protagonist, you are so powerful, why don't you take out the entire universe?

It's a good novel with a good idea, but the comedy effect is lacking and the visuals are not strong enough~