The First Demon of All Time

Ah, I finished reading another book by Big Monkey a long time ago and have been waiting for it. I just feel that not many people have read this book, and the plot seems not as good as the previous one. But it's still five stars, I hope Big Monkey gets better and better!

It's so good. Ever since The Strongest Monster System, I've lost confidence in other monster books and I'm too lazy to read them. Today I found out that the author has published another book. I hurried over to read it. It's so good, let me tell you! By the way, is the heroine the little girl from the protagonist's sect?

After waiting for such a long time from the completion of The Strongest Monster to now, Big Monkey has finally released a new book, and it's still the style I like to read.

Hey, will Ye Huan be able to meet Lin Ritian and Xiao Long when he ascends in the future? It's really exciting.

The Strongest Monster System is my favorite book. It is also because of this book that I fell in love with novels. I hope this book can surpass The Strongest Monster System and achieve better results!

I have always believed in the big monkey. The wolf is vividly described at the beginning of the novel. After all, he has several years of experience. I believe Big Monkey can be stronger.

After "The Strongest Monster System", the author has opened a new pit. Xiao Long's story may not be over, but Ye Huan is here. I look forward to the author's continued updates!

First of all, I think novels about alien beasts must bring out animal nature, otherwise it will be the same as writing novels about people with the skin of a monster beast, so try not to use the Virgin. You can refer to "The Dragon Who Devoured the World" here. Secondly, it is better to write a novel about the alien beast genre. It is better to write about the protagonist's feelings as a demon, or in the form of demons and humans. Which side should the protagonist help? Which side does it matter? The most difficult thing about novels about alien beasts is to make the protagonist have the heart of a monster, instead of just traveling into a monster. You can refer to "Rebirth of the Strongest Monster" here (I'm not sure whether Sun Dahou and Kobi Monkey are the same number) Finally, I hope to add some chapters about the abuse of the Lord, so that the article will not become a brainless and cool article. Although "The Abuse of the Lord" failed, if you add some chapters and grasp the accuracy, the novel will become better. I hope the author can write better and better (the above are personal opinions, I hope the author will adopt them)

It's very good. It was written by the author of the first systematic novel I read. I have always admired this author. The main tasks are well connected and there are almost no flaws. I recommend everyone to read his first book. Very nice to look at. I didn't skip a chapter from beginning to end. It's very fascinating to read. In short, I will always support this author. Come on, author! Although it has been a long time since the author published a new book. (￣Y▽￣)~* Cover your mouth and snicker

The author listened to what I said: Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it impresses readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are fluent, and the psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful in one go, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the subject matter is very novel. The angle is clearly visible. The language is plain yet elegant. Simple yet meaningful. This article is a model article. The literary skills that show extraordinary in the ordinary can be said to be precious every word. Every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view. This article could be improved. But his meaning is far greater than success itself. There is also the use of punctuation marks. Just right. After reading your article word for word, my heart cannot calm down for a long time. How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You gave me a deep understanding of the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I did not dare to reply easily. I was worried that my vulgar language would tarnish this rare article in the world, but I still replied because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a lifelong regret for me, no matter how wonderful the article was with gorgeous rhetoric. So I just want to say one thing. Your novel is so touching! How about... Another chapter?

The ending was rushed, but fortunately, it wasn't completely unfinished_(:з∠)_

Since I finished reading the first book, I have been waiting for the second one. This book is about "revenge", it is about rebirth, and it is not completely unfinished. It is a good ending. Unfortunately, the author did not write it for some reason, otherwise this book will be better, and it can even reach 1000 chapters. In this way, this book will not be worse than the first book. This book is still highly recommended! Question: 1. Why hasn't the author published a new book yet? [What] 2. Why doesn't the protagonist merge two small worlds, one is yin and the other is yang? When fused, the strength will only be stronger and not weaker! None

The rating is 8.8, Just kidding. Isn't such a beautiful book shocking to everyone, Yushu Linfeng, loved by everyone, and the first choice for thumbs up?

It's not inferior to the monster system at all. The plot and the description of the fighting scenes all impressed me, and the ending is quite satisfactory. However, I'm still very upset when I think of missing a lot of the plot. So it's been so long, where is your new book?

I have to say that it is very good, but it also has shortcomings. I won't talk about the previous book. The shortcomings of this book are also obvious, that is, it is not attractive enough. If it is not attractive, no matter how good the content is, readers may not be interested in reading it before they see it. As for my personal experience, the beginning was a bit boring and unattractive, so I left after reading it for the first time. It was only a few days ago that I accidentally discovered that the book was finished and started reading it. Facts have proved that you are attracted to the book at first glance (not to mention the contradiction, the opening chapter is not attractive, how can you keep the readers, and the readers leave without feeling the excitement). I believe that some readers also read the book because they have read the previous one, but they did not insist on finishing it. Obviously, this book also inherits the shortcomings of the previous one. It is good to read, but it is a pity that it ends so hastily. Okay, I won't say much more, and I'm looking forward to your next book (the system flow is good, but the origin of the system does not need to be explained in that way, and there is no need to travel through time or anything, rebirth is good, but it depends on yourself, no matter how you write, you will always have a group of readers who silently support you behind the scenes... Ahem, add one more sentence, I really want to see a fantasy linkage/friendly guest appearance, as long as it does not affect the plot)

It feels similar to the strongest monster system 😂 but still looks good

This book is very nice and similar to the previous one, but I don't know how it will end.

I like Big Monkey's article very much. I like to read about monsters, especially those who transform into snakes. It's so well written. Come on!

Brother Monkey, the first novel I read was yours. It was very well written. I hope this one will be too! ! ! This one is great too!

Wonderful plot, perfect foreshadowing, although the previous book did not explain all the foreshadowing. The author's writing is still superb! This book has the same style as the previous one. I fully hope this book will get a good score with five stars.

The Strongest Monster System. I watched it over and over again and never got tired of it.

I feel like the strongest monster system is still good

This book is also very good. It is the first monster novel I have read on this platform. The protagonist is also very experienced in fighting. At first glance, you can tell that the author is very good at writing. However, the ending is a bit hasty and catches people off guard, but it is not a bad ending. Finally, come on, author, please publish a new book as soon as possible

There are so few people reading this book. It's a pity that such a good book is available.

Wasn't Xiao Long's apprentice reincarnated in the previous book? Will he appear in this book?

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The plot is a bit delayed, but it's still enjoyable. Although it's not as good as the strongest monster system, it's still five stars.

I really hope that when I read your first novel about snakes, I will read the rebirth of the strongest monster🌚

Crested Pig Belly and Leopard Tail, a perfect novel

Brother Monkey, I am really looking forward to your next work. This one is not as good as "The Strongest Monster System"