The Phoenix Defies the Heavens

I think the author must have read the original version of Feng Ni Tianxia. I am a fan of Feng Ni Tianxia. This book is really far behind the original Feng Ni Tianxia. People who have read the original Feng Ni Tianxia should know that the first few chapters of this book are somewhat similar to the original Feng Ni Tianxia. It can be said that they are changing the soup without changing the medicine, but the author's writing is so bad

I've seen Feng Ni Tianxia in Sa's comics before, and he also traveled through time.

I didn't like it, so I gave up after reading the first part. I can't explain how I felt, it was just awkward. I thought he was from Lu Da when I saw the name.

How can I put it? The language is mediocre and has no highlights. It would be better to use more references to the environment or scenery to enhance the atmosphere. Some words are not used properly. Compared with those better novels, it is inferior and cannot attract readers' interest in reading. It is too simple and it cannot arouse my emotional resonance when I read it. From the very beginning, when the identity of the heroine after the time-travel was introduced, the situation of this continent was not clearly introduced, and when the girl's cultivation was written, the cultivation level of the continent was not clearly stated. Moreover, when reading, I felt that the heroine could not even practice spiritual energy before, but after the time-travel, the practice is simple and fast. And the contracted beast of the heroine at the beginning was said to have unfathomable strength, it was Zi Xuan, while the heroine was only Orange Xuan at the time... It felt very strange. This book has many shortcomings: the language is ordinary and not detailed, and the male protagonist is not outstanding... The most important thing is that it has no atmosphere. Write more descriptions of the environment, scenery, and psychology! And some of the sentences are wrong and have ambiguous meanings. I skipped to the end after reading the first few chapters because it was a bit boring. I came here because of the name. It has the same name as another novel whose heroine is Huang Beiyue, but there are still some differences. I hope the author will keep trying again and never give up! Today is the New Year, and I wish the author a Happy New Year! ! !

It's too bad. I thought it was quite good at first. When I read the first and second chapters, the heroine's character should be domineering, but later on, the heroine's character becomes cold and very complicated. Then, the heroine has purple hair and purple eyes. Isn't anyone confused or suspicious?

As an OCD sufferer, it really drives me crazy. . ! !

The heroine is very sassy, ​​but the aura of the protagonist is too strong. She fell off a cliff and cured all the strange poisons in the world, and she also became a master.

I don't have anything to say, and the plot just feels illogical.

The plot develops too fast and can't keep up with the pace. The details are not described carefully enough, it would be better to revise it. Personal opinions, for reference only! Don't spray if you don't like it! Thanks!

Okay, it's a little different from the comics