Rebirth*******

I was a little flustered when I saw this novel! I also wrote a book, and it was also something I was desperate to read. I have always insisted on that sentence in my heart: As the word count increases, so does the recommended limit. But seeing that this author has written more than one million words, and it's still like this, I suddenly feel that I am wasting my time in vain. Writing a novel takes a lot of time. If I only have such a meager income, I might as well play games. The subject matter of this book is good, and it has a strong Western flavor, but the author made a big mistake in his writing. Be careful when using the first person. In fact, if you don't use the first person, this Western expression is still quite good. The first person is mostly used for inner monologue. When used in writing, it feels like talking to oneself. The common writing technique is third-person narrative and first-person substitution. I skipped and listened to a few chapters, and it was indeed a writing problem. If you don't mind the first person, this novel is also very good. Seeing that the author has not read a book for so long, I suggest you read more books at the top of the list and learn some experience. I also recommend the author to read a course text (don't say you know how to write online articles) It introduces how new writers can avoid pitfalls and what issues they need to pay attention to when writing. I didn't read this book until after the recommendation period, and I really regretted it. I hope it can be of some help to the author! Come on! ☺️☺️☺️☺️

Personally I think it looks good

I think it's okay

The writing is very interesting, but the format may not suit me personally. Is it a Western-style reading? It feels a bit confusing and needs to be sorted out in my mind while reading.

Author, write quickly, write quickly. I give you 5 stars.

A good book, five-star review

Very good. This is a different novel than what I have seen before.