I, Ao Guang, Lead the Dragon Clan to Rule the Primordial World

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Generals are written too high. Generals are at the Daluo level at most. A small zombie can enter the Pangu Palace and eat half of Pangu's heart. The Pangu Palace can block the way of heaven. Even the way of heaven cannot enter the Pangu Palace. A small zombie can enter.

It's okay, but there's something wrong with the general chapter. Can anyone gnaw on Pangu's Heart? Won't it really explode? Everything else is OK.

That's ridiculous. The Dragon Clan's strength has increased to the Hunyuan Golden Immortal in such a short period of time. Where did it come from so many resources? When Zulong was there, there were only one resource. How come you have more than ten? It seems that there is no bottleneck. As long as the karma is eliminated, you can enter the Hunyuan Golden Immortal.

Does the protagonist want to avoid being low-key and cannot use the Three Immortals Island to escape from the world? You want to be low-key and have good luck, so you should take such a good thing at the same time. You clearly know that Yang Chan is the son of Liangjie and you still want your daughter to be your disciple. Don't tell me if you, Hunyuan Daluo, don't know. The memory of a time traveler is completely useless. I don't know. Why do time travelers always go crazy and make rain in the primitive world? Wouldn't it be better to live a peaceful life without the strength that defies heaven? You have to fight for anything. If you don't have the strength, don't always go against the ancestor Hongjun and the way of heaven. You are a variable, not an anomaly.

Come on author, I'm particularly optimistic about it. 

I really like this type of novel, good luck to the author.

This novel by the author is generally good. But some details are not. For example, how can a saint resist? How can your Ten Thousand Dragons Formation resist? It can withstand a few moves at most, and there is nothing wrong with the method of killing three corpses. Well, you are calling it rubbish. It's just that the method of killing three corpses can achieve the way of heaven and become a saint. And it also requires Hongmeng Purple Qi. The author of this book reached the realm of cultivation too quickly in the early stage. Look at those people who are hiding in Hongguang Mountain. None of them, the old guys, have been practicing for a long time. Your age as a dragon has passed. Those who practice should practice more slowly. As for the shaman and demon clans you wrote about, they were born in accordance with the times. Born with great luck. How is it possible that he can't even compare to the protagonist?

To be honest, this book is not very well written! Don't accuse me of being bad, I admit that I can't write it, but at least I have read a lot of novels, and this book is really not that good!

Although this book is about the dragon clan, the other way of writing is good and good, but there is a problem when reading this chapter. Not to mention other things, he said that among the new masters, except for those kings, he is the only one who can adjust them. This will not work. There are only two ways now. The first one is just like this Yes, the second type is a few people or others, such as Prime Minister Turtle, Lao Chen, etc. After all, they have been with you for so long, and even they can't move you. For example, if they have been with you for a few months or a year, and they have been with you for decades, they might as well have been with you for a few months and a year, that's about it.