Immortality is the ultimate dream that countless emperors, generals, ministers and ordinary people have dreamed of throughout the ages. As everyone knows, this is just a pawn in the game with the God of Creation. Do you really think that immortality is that good?
Reader comments
The male protagonist is too cheap. Not only is he useless, but he also has a lot of problems. He is always doubting others and talks too much. He often puts the people in the team back. And he thought the heroine liked him, but he was a coward and a loser, and he had a lot of problems.
Not bad, but I feel like the plot line is a bit lacking
It looks pretty good from the front, but I don't know about the back.
The front is okay, but the back is too wordy and confusing.
It looks good, I like it, but the main character is too cowardly
The plot in the front is compact and interesting, but the tediousness in the back is just a make-up.
The male protagonist is too cheap. Not only is he useless, but he also has a lot of problems. He is always doubting others and talks too much. He often puts the people in the team back. And he thought the heroine liked him, but he was a coward and a loser, and he had a lot of problems.
Not bad, but I feel like the plot line is a bit lacking
It looks pretty good from the front, but I don't know about the back.
The front is okay, but the back is too wordy and confusing.
It looks good, I like it, but the main character is too cowardly
The plot in the front is compact and interesting, but the tediousness in the back is just a make-up.