Elf Online Game: My Mission Rewards Can Be Optimized

Newbie, new book, if you feel something is inappropriate, you can mention it here~ If you want a supporting role, you can reply with name + elf (don't be too outrageous...) + Desired character

It's quite good-looking, and basically everything about evolution is correct. Come on, the author, I hope you don't want a heroine and don't start a harem😘😘

I felt good after watching it for a long time! I just can't find the protagonist's goal! And relatively speaking, it is too difficult to write this kind of setting for your first book. It can be seen that you have put a lot of thought into it, but I still can't find a point that can be brought into it. . . Well.

The fried chicken is great! Let's all come and see it together! (^ω^)

Well, this is the third book in Tomato that I rated five stars. Although it is a systematic book, it feels very good. It is not invincible at the beginning, nor does it have a lot of water-space text. It is written very slowly but very carefully. One chapter is full of chapters that can be compared with several other systematic books. This is the first time I read a detailed article, because most of them are unfinished after two or three hundred. The writing is very casual, but I should work hard if I accidentally find an author like this. I'll give you a reward later. ୧⍤⃝🍗

Game-oriented Pokémon, A relatively good way of writing, And it's not a traditional Pokémon game, It looks more like the writing style of the domestic Pokémon mobile game. The currently known bridge sections include: Log in early, rewards will burst, and civilians will counterattack, A huge conspiracy, full of opportunities.

The system of this book is not very useful. The content feels very real. You can bring yourself into it. It feels super good. It's super awesome. I express my love for you. Come on~ If you can, use more Braille. If you can't read it enough, I'll cry (๑óò๑) Come on, you are the fattest, hahaha＼(^▽^)／!

This book is one of the few good Pokemon books I have read. I hope the author can continue writing. I don't want to see a good book just disappear.

The overall style is humorous, with lots of laughs. The Pokémon genre shows a new Pokémon world by the author, come on😘

The author's settings for the attributes and power system of Pokemon are very reasonable, and he also has a good understanding of the settings in the Pokemon anime and in the game. The plot is not protracted, interesting and fast (✘) (manual funny), the content is substantial and the characters are very distinct. After boasting, let's talk about something else. How should I put it? Compared with other elf novels, the advantages of the Golden Finger system are not very obvious. On this basis, it is not a great idea to give the protagonist such a big advantage, right? It's quite refreshing but the aftertaste is a bit lacking. I hope it can be adjusted a little bit and it will be good. Among the many elf novels I have read, I have eliminated a bunch of them that I feel the author has never seen in anime or games, eliminated a bunch of them that the author has poor narration and golden fingers that look uncomfortable. Among the few good articles that remain, I hope that the author can continue to work hard to make this work a better work. As a long-time bookworm of online novels and a young person whose childhood was filled with Pokémon, I am very grateful to the author for his excellent works. (This article is worth three cents, I hope the author can pay it into the account) Then look for a secondary character (manual comedy) (purpose revealed), and hope that the pet is a lazy person (sluggish). I'm done (paralysis).

The content is innovative and original, with clear logic and well-organized content. It is not a brainless article. Please be careful if you want to read a brainless article.

A very, very, very, very, very, very good Pokémon novel. I would like to recommend another one called Pokémon: Legendary Trainer. Although it is not finished, I think it is very well written.

It's so good. This is one of the few times I've read it in one sitting in the past two years. To be honest, I haven't read a novel seriously in a long time. Also, the three novels written by the author are all very good and I like them very much. But in the end, ahem, it's a bit short and not enough to read!

It's very beautiful. The chat between the protagonist and the fw (ahem) system is very interesting. I'm really looking forward to what will happen when the main system comes back. Of course, the main system's illegitimate system looks silly and cute, but what bad intentions can the fw system have? (･᷄ὢ･᷅) Most of the elves are my favorite type. I have read some Pokémon novels. This book by the author was very interesting to me personally. It would be great if there were no glitches (ahem, cross it out). In short, it is very healthy. You can read it🌝🌝

It is a very exciting story, and the various twists and turns in the plot are very interesting. Although the ending is a bit hasty and seems to have a lot of foreshadowing, it is not explained clearly, but it is undeniable that it is a good book. I look forward to reading the next one. There are some small things that are difficult to deal with, but it's not a big problem [laughing] (Don't look at my reading time, I read half of it, and finally finished it in one go~

I've read so many Elf fanfics on Tomato, and this one can be said to be the best.

It's very interesting. I look forward to the day when the author will finish this book seriously.

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful. I also like Pokémon.

Another very good novel in the "Pokémon" series.

It's better overall, even if you haven't watched Pokémon, you can enjoy it (*ﾉ▽ﾉ)

It looks good, I hope the male protagonist becomes the best in the world.

Although there are few now, there is quality. Tomato is the better elf fanfic now. Come on, author, becoming a great god is not a dream.

It is indeed one of the few masterpieces in the Pokemon series that I have seen. There is no excessive system arrangement and it conforms to the logic and thinking of normal people. Every item has its own clear origin, and there is no harem, which is particularly great. Strongly positive, but at the same time I would like to make a small unkind request. Can the author arrange a Commander Cleaver for the protagonist? I really like this elf, but 99% of the novels do not mention this elf. Please.

It warms up slowly, it's very comfortable to watch, and the anger is not that strong. It's great.

The writing is pretty good, and the protagonist is not too invincible in the early stages. I really enjoyed reading it, and the author has more to say.

This is not a brainless article, the strength system is pretty good, at least it has not collapsed, and there is no situation where the strength explodes in a short period of time, and the air is blown away every second. I really like it. Come on.

I have read this book for a long time, and the description of the battle in the middle is the best I have written to this day. Of all the Pokémon novels, this one is my favorite. Although the author took a break for some reason, I have always kept it on my bookshelf. I know good things and novels are worth waiting for! ! !

This is the first pet novel + fanfic I read. I'm not a Pokémon fan myself, but now that I've read 60 chapters, I feel pretty good about it.

It's very interesting, but I hope it won't be too complicated. What we want to see is the plot, so we won't use anything too advanced.

It is very well written. Among all the Pokémon novels I have read on Tomato, this book is the best. I sincerely recommend it to Pokémon fans.