The Original Supreme of Time Travel

I have read dozens of chapters about the space I promised.

Personally, I think the plot is okay. As for the earthenware jars of chestnut rice porridge and jeans mentioned by some book friends, I personally think the novel is fine as long as it doesn't come out with some hot weapons. I won't tell you why this novel is so good. People who think it's good have comments. Please tell yourself whether it's a robot or not. I want to talk about a few bad points. I picked two. The first one I care about the most is the Qiankun Bag at the beginning. In Chapter 729, I didn't even see a shadow. (But I have a forced explanation. After all, this Qiankun bag was given by Yin people, maybe it is similar to a soul magic weapon that can only be used by the soul.) The second one is that the heroine Shi Yue is definitely a loser. What she does is not good. She is the first prodigal. It feels like it is used to describe the character of the protagonist. She is overbearing and cold outside and a weakling at home. Although being overbearing and cold is a bit unrealistic, it really gave me this feeling. In short, it's worth watching but don't take it too seriously. After all, you are not the author.

Yes, the subject matter is novel, the narrative is reasonable, and the plot is not exaggerated. I just don't know how to write it later, so don't make it unfinished.

I just want to ask, where are the storage beads? Where have you gone?

Good book recommendation

Very good and worth watching

Everyone else's names start with Jie, why did he just use his previous name?

Most of it looks okay, my personal opinion is just for entertainment, but the last part is unsatisfactory. Everyone jumps to watch

🌺If you smile before we meet, you will have a lifetime promise at the first meeting

It's well written, but it's developed, a bit slow, and it's still low. You'll know if it's good or bad until you read it again.

Interesting, the author has a clever idea, the characters communicate with each other, the narration is smooth, and the characters' inner activities are detailed.

The first five-star book, not bad, not bad

I like to read books that travel back to primitive society. Do any book friends recommend it?

Good to pass the time

Very good book

Come home and cook dinner, sister

Good. Details are important

This is also possible, very good

Fortunately 😊 Shuhuang has nothing to do and read it

Very exciting, okay?

The plot is novel and not exaggerated, good!

Good book, worth owning!

A bit attractive hehe

Very good very good

Yes, you put a lot of thought into writing the book!

This novel is good

Feeling particularly interesting

Just a little more price

Good book and very imaginative

Very beautiful, wonderful