My Secret Girlfriend

It's a pity that Teacher Su was not included in the harem

Does the author have any other books? It's well written and has the flavor of previous novels. It's not the same as today's cool novels. Is there a fan base? I'd like to chat with the author.

The novel is actually quite good, but I feel that the protagonist is a bit scumbag, but it is also relatively real. There are too many temptations in this world, and it is understandable that the protagonist is too young to resist. I strongly condemn the behavior of scumbag men. Personally, I give the protagonist a 6 and the novel an 8.5.

Just a loser's ultimate fantasy

In fact, the writing style is good, it reads smoothly, the expression is powerful, the logic is self-consistent, and the foreshadowing is echoed. Although the end of the article is self-deprecating, I think it is okay to write this. Anyway, I still hope to see the follow-up, or in my imagination, the plot in the middle should be more twists and turns. Obviously, the author deliberately did not write about the political battles. Otherwise, I think the author's penmanship could well describe the hidden darkness and struggles in the officialdom. However, the detailed description of this part is a bit off topic and is not conducive to retaining readers, so it is understandable. Later, the development of the film and television industry was also somewhat lacking in writing, using double-line writing and interweaving light and dark. Although it effectively avoided difficult parts to write, it also weakened the depth and richness of the article to a certain extent. The protagonist's sense of moral responsibility in dealing with women feels lame, but may have been intentional to appeal to readers, but now it turns out to be the opposite of the original intention. You can refer to "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn". The problem mainly lies in the character design of the protagonist, but such a character design is reasonable and annoying. I think this is because, for ordinary people, this kind of protagonist does not have a strong sense of empathy and cannot think from another person's perspective, which is why such a contradiction occurs, or what can be said is almost a bit psychologically distorted. In addition, if possible, I hope the author can conceive the characters more and add contradictions and twists. In fact, I want to say something more. I am a high school student. When I read this kind of novel, I was still shocked inside and made me sigh with emotion.

Those who can't get it are always in turmoil, and those who are favored are confident.

It's great, especially the line "His love has been redeemed". I like it very much. Work well. I want to give it away. The self-righteous poor boy from three years ago. Give him love. Redemption has come. If Mengmeng didn't slander the male protagonist at the beginning (although if not, I guess the male protagonist and Mengmeng would not have an intersection and would only be with Xiaoxue until the end), (after removing this surrounding plot), I can't even imagine that in reality I would meet such a cute and cute girl who dares to love and hate. It is simply irresistible to like her.

Come on, author, the writing is pretty good, the pace is good, the ups and downs of the plot are okay, just make it longer.

I read this book when I was a freshman. I only read it when I was a senior. Time is really like a speedboat, taking away youth and leaving behind the taste of memories.

The ending is actually pretty good.