The Earth Mage's Rise

Although the characterization is not very detailed, the heroine is very vague. But the plot is smooth and the author has great potential. I hope the author can work hard! The next one is better.

Did anyone think of Toph in Avatar [laughing]

Does the author have no heroine?

Not bad. It would be nice if the details were more refined. The plot is too fast...

Well written and engaging

Okay, you can try it

The structure is clear and the story is wonderful 👍👍👍