Qin Mu traveled to the world of immortal cultivation and spent more than three hundred years until he died of old age and reached the golden elixir stage.
"Huh? The ancestral manifestation system was awakened after death? Can you improve the strength of your children and grandchildren and help them make their dreams come true?"
Therefore, he, the ancestor of the Qin family, began to appear continuously after his death, leading his children and grandchildren to dominate the world of immortality!
Reader comments
It's quite casual. The general situation is that hundreds of years ago, the Blood Spirit Religion fought against hundreds of tribes and broke the spiritual veins. From then on, the spiritual energy was not enough to support the birth of a peak golden elixir. The protagonist developed his family through the help of the system. He looked around and passed the time in his leisure time. The battles were not that intense. There were many treasures that were eye-opening.
I think it's pretty good, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you for your cooperation.
It's okay, although it's a way. There is no harem drama or romance, but the author still has a conscience. The writing style is ordinary and avoids a common problem of online novels (grammatical errors and misuse of idioms throughout the article). The author's technique is ordinary, the sentences are mediocre, and the plot is average. But I am more conscientious than most Internet writers, and it is still a good way to pass the time. I hope the author will continue to work hard and read more famous works (you can learn from the techniques, plot arrangements, etc.). When writing a book, always check a modern Chinese dictionary from the Commercial Press. Come on, author!
It looks good, but regardless of the map, a map is all about analysis and calculation. After looking at it for a day, I got sick of it. The ending is just at the Nascent Soul stage. Those who want to see people climbing up, changing maps, and cultivating immortals should take a detour.
The system is really awesome, it has a variety of functions, and the author's IQ is online throughout the entire process. It's a good book.
OK. Feeling pretty good
The author is so awesome, come on, come on, come on!
It's quite casual. The general situation is that hundreds of years ago, the Blood Spirit Religion fought against hundreds of tribes and broke the spiritual veins. From then on, the spiritual energy was not enough to support the birth of a peak golden elixir. The protagonist developed his family through the help of the system. He looked around and passed the time in his leisure time. The battles were not that intense. There were many treasures that were eye-opening. I think it's pretty good, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you for your cooperation.
It's okay, although it's a way. There is no harem drama or romance, but the author still has a conscience. The writing style is ordinary and avoids a common problem of online novels (grammatical errors and misuse of idioms throughout the article). The author's technique is ordinary, the sentences are mediocre, and the plot is average. But I am more conscientious than most Internet writers, and it is still a good way to pass the time. I hope the author will continue to work hard and read more famous works (you can learn from the techniques, plot arrangements, etc.). When writing a book, always check a modern Chinese dictionary from the Commercial Press. Come on, author!
It looks good, but regardless of the map, a map is all about analysis and calculation. After looking at it for a day, I got sick of it. The ending is just at the Nascent Soul stage. Those who want to see people climbing up, changing maps, and cultivating immortals should take a detour. The system is really awesome, it has a variety of functions, and the author's IQ is online throughout the entire process. It's a good book.
OK. Feeling pretty good
The author is so awesome, come on, come on, come on!