Fox Yingning

The story is written in a real and natural way, and the customs, history and culture are easily accessible. Ying Ning's emotional direction is also very gripping. However, some plots are too wordy. Although the description is good, there is no need to write so much about irrelevant things. Finally, I found out that the official match was actually the king's uniform?! I hope the author gives a good ending.

I just feel like the author is so cute. I feel like I always have to explain a lot after writing a sentence. Are you afraid that readers will misunderstand? In fact, as long as you think about it more, you can save a lot of unnecessary content. I hope the author will continue to work hard ^0^~ Come on

Not bad, it's the type I like to read anyway, the writing is good, it's quite interesting,

The cockfighting part of the article is very interesting, but there are too many unnecessary plots (such as introducing the life of the Wang family), which makes it a bit tiring to read, but the author wrote it very carefully and other parts are very good. I look forward to the next development of the novel♥

The writing is very good and has a sense of life. The local customs and customs covered are quite realistic. The novel "Along the River"

It's quite interesting, but the non-protagonist's past is too detailed and cumbersome. Why don't you write it?

It's very interesting. The prosperity, local customs and customs of Tokyo city in that era are all unfolding before your eyes, as if you have experienced it in person.

The writing is quite detailed, and the psychological description of the characters is realistic, but there are many places that are elaborated one by one. It feels quite confusing and cumbersome. I guess the author has his own ideas! I hope to see the update as soon as possible and the final destination of the heroine's relationship.

The author's writing style is very good, and the upper and lower parts are connected naturally. Keep reading... It's a pretty good article.

It's really beautiful. Why doesn't anyone see it? Oh, I really missed it.