A generation of military kings acted as landlords,
Then stir up the storm and turn into a dragon.
Even if there is beauty, there is also a million gold,
But he kills thousands of miles without leaving a trace.
I vow to turn an inch into a long sword,
The nine heavens and ten earths are at my disposal.
One day the dust will be gone,
A world of flowers hides fame.
Reader comments
It's too addictive and has too many typos. It's not suitable for old book fans. You can read it without thinking, but you can still read it patiently after reading a few chapters. Reason for abandoning the book decisively: The further you read the table of contents, the more you can't be bothered to write a title. There are two chapters in one chapter that are not separated at all.
As an old book fan, I really can't stand it anymore. The author, I advise you that if you want to write a novel well, you should read more books to enrich yourself. Don't be confused when writing novels. The word order should be smooth, make fewer typos, and write the name of the protagonist in your novel correctly. There are too many complaints in your novel.
That's it for now, see you later
However, it's not easy to give you a five-star review because of your writing.
It's too addictive and has too many typos. It's not suitable for old book fans. You can read it without thinking, but you can still read it patiently after reading a few chapters. Reason for abandoning the book decisively: The further you read the table of contents, the more you can't be bothered to write a title. There are two chapters in one chapter that are not separated at all. As an old book fan, I really can't stand it anymore. The author, I advise you that if you want to write a novel well, you should read more books to enrich yourself. Don't be confused when writing novels. The word order should be smooth, make fewer typos, and write the name of the protagonist in your novel correctly. There are too many complaints in your novel. That's it for now, see you later However, it's not easy to give you a five-star review because of your writing.
Too many typos
The artistic conception of this book is beautiful