Lingding Immortal Fate

I have read this book twice. The plot is touching, down-to-earth, and wonderful.

Not bad. All I can say is it's okay. You can read this book. It is indeed quite obvious that it is unfinished. However, the entire chapter is not particularly long. At least it's not that annoying.

The writing of this novel is quite good, and the plot is quite reasonable. There is no bloody plot. The protagonist grows from weak to strong, neither arrogant nor impetuous, practicing bit by bit. The supporting characters are also written with flesh and blood. Unlike some novels where the supporting characters are written, the men are all lustful and hungry, and they only think that way when they see the women. The women are all arrogant, domineering, arrogant and unreasonable. The way the villain is written, you can use certain things he does, certain plots he arranges, and set up obstacles for the protagonist, instead of blindly playing dirty tricks and being inferior. This novel does not have this problem, and the quality is considered to be quite good.

This book is really well written up to this point. It is wonderful and exciting. The plot setting was a bit old at the beginning, but then it went very well! The three views are very upright. This article at least makes people feel happy to read without feeling that the three views are not correct. There is pursuit but not indiscriminate killing. There is a golden finger, but it is not too big and it is just right. I don't know why the score is low. But I think it's probably due to the later stage being unfinished.

Great author, why is it so unfinished? Personally, I think your work is on par with, or even better than, the founder of Mortal Style: Mortal Cultivation of Immortality: The Legend of Immortality. Although it is currently rated a bit low and is not well-known, gold will always shine, and its light will shine when it is placed in a bag. It will eventually be recognized. I look forward to the author continuing to update the book.

The plot is good, I can see the protagonist's change of mind, and there is no cheating, which is very good. 😊

I particularly like this type of novel. The character design is very rich and the plot is detailed and interesting. Come on, thank you

A very, very good novel

Good-looking, compact, careful and clean, quite good at writing, worth reading, excellent novel

It's a bad novel. Except for the last two chapters, the whole book is wonderful. The author has profound skills and is better than a mortal who can cultivate immortality.

The plot rushes towards you, and the protagonist's simple appearance, thrilling journey, and cautious and wise performance are refreshing. It ends too quickly, as if a person's enlightenment was suddenly interrupted by something, and he is very upset!

The story is exciting, not a cliche, and worth watching.

I finished reading this novel about cultivating immortals in one go. It's very interesting. It deserves five stars. It's great.

The most worth reading novel in a long time

The writing style and content are very good. The only regret is that he forcibly shut down the phone [face covering] The junior sister at the door who wanted to become a Taoist couple with him did not explain it. The two Taoist monks introduced to him by his master's mother did not even touch his little hands. I was either reading a novel in my trance, or it was like reality. Some of my companions got separated when they said they were separated, and some people died when they said they were dead. There were no companions, no companions and friends, even the enemies appeared for a moment and then disappeared, such as the two monks of the young master of Huadu Sect [laughing and crying]

It's relatively good-looking, with coherent characters and storylines, and no sense of exaggeration or fabrication. Come on!

The concept is wonderful and clever. Although it is still an old routine of mortals cultivating immortals, there are also new ideas in it.

Don't be misunderstood by the rating. This is at least a 9.5 Good book. The people who lowered the rating here are all children of Shuangwen. You can tell at a glance! The writing style and the inner characters are well grasped. Key points: this book is not a God's perspective, but a first-person expression similar to "Mortals Cultivation to Immortality". The fighting is not one-shot or awesome, but the details are written down. The items and cultivation techniques are also written down in detail. Don't forget to know it all! It's so bad [palms face] Damn it, I should slowly write 2000 chapters later

At first I didn't think it was exciting enough, but then as I watched it I realized it was real and realistic! This is indeed the psychology of little people!

Although it was a bit disappointing that the book ended suddenly, it was at least better than the awkward plot of a book that forced tens of thousands of years. Overall, I'm quite grateful to the author for the accident. I didn't feel like I couldn't watch it halfway through. The most important thing is the sudden ending, which made me so happy that I laughed all night long. Fortunately, no one heard me, otherwise they thought I was sick. Finally, I still have to support the author. Although I am a free prostitute, I want to support you mentally. I hope you won't dislike it, ha!

It's well written. It's great that a group of twelve or thirteen year olds can do this.

The content is good! It ends too soon! However, the chapters are not long and do not seem tiring.

Although the ending is rather hasty and many jokes need to be filled in by your own imagination, this book still has a wonderful story, vivid descriptions of scenes, and rich and full characters. With such an ending, I look forward to a great master writing a sequel!

Ups and downs, ordinary people, ordinary peace of mind! A heart that refuses to admit defeat! ! !

This book describes how a commoner can reach the peak step by step. In fact, every step is very difficult. Although his innate conditions are not very good, Shi Yin can rely on caution, diligence and studiousness, and seize opportunities, which fully shows his intelligence! Wonderful! Some places describe the secular world very well! But I don't understand why the author ended it suddenly! So sudden! Many things have no beginning and no end! What happened to Patriarch Yingui? Is she Senior Sister Chen? The mistress's niece is in charge? Where were his childhood friends? Where is his little tripod? Looking forward to the sequel! There are a few typos

Very exciting! After being short of books for a while, I finally have the desire to read again.

The rhythm of the story is very good, and the plot is ups and downs, soothing and smooth.

A book that can make people read at night is worthy of praise. Although cultivating immortality seems so simple, it is not exaggerated at will and the plot design is quite good. The display of humanity is also reasonable. I just hope it won't break down later. Look forward to it.

The writing is mature and the storyline is exciting. It is a very good book.

It's okay, the content is good, but the ending is a bit sloppy, but the short story is still well written!