Reborn in the City: The Only Immortal

Isn't there a girl named Xin'er here? Why didn't you show up?

The writing is wonderful, but there are too many typos. I just typed it up and I haven't corrected it from beginning to end.

I'm a bit suspicious that he is an old monster who has been practicing for three thousand years. He writes that someone who has been practicing for three thousand years is like a college student who has just left school.

Not bad, but it seems like it's not finished.

If you can deceive someone, you can't poison me.

Well enough. A bit interesting

Since they have already made enemies, and they are still mortal enemies, why not kill them all?

It's super cool, but the ending is a bit rushed. I hope I can see the final victory of the fairy world 😄😄

Why didn't you write about the fairy world?

Very good, I like to watch it