Xuanhuan: A Toad from the Start

The plot in the first few chapters was a bit jerky, but after entering Liuyue Valley, the plot became much smoother and more attractive.

I feel that the author's writing style is very good. It feels like I am reading a work from the Republic of China period (I don't know if everyone is like this, I have not read many novels of this type). He also uses a lot of descriptions of appearance, details, descriptions and modifications, but there seems to be no description of facial expressions to highlight the mood of the characters. There are also some logical errors and numerical errors. Without a book review, the author cannot find the errors.

So pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Well written with great details! Love it, love it

High-quality and refreshing article, very enjoyable

I feel very good. Brother, I have been waiting for you for a year. When will you come back?

The plot has ups and downs. I felt relaxed and happy watching it. .

It's so good, why doesn't anyone read it? Great cheers for the author!!!

Very good, come on author