Downstairs of the Rental House Is the Entrance to the Underworld

Young people who don't respect martial ethics sneak attack on a 69-year-old comrade like me. Is this good? This is not good, so please give me more advice.

The front feels pretty good, I have a sense of seeing the dragon clan, Mingfei Oh Zedian

Well, I wrote half of it, and then the last paragraph ended directly, um, suddenly, very suddenly, very suddenly

The overall style is humorous, but the ending is rather sudden, and the male protagonist also has a relatively positive view of relationships. In today's fast food era, relationships are also fast talk, and loving someone has become a relatively superficial term. Love someone deeply without saying a word, just like it.

Son, keep up the good work

Loli, loli, little loli = ͟͟͞͞( 'ヮ' 'ヮ' = ͟͟͞͞)

Okay, big cheers to the author

It was okay at the beginning

Very good and informative.

Very interesting plot

It's pretty good at the moment, don't write it badly

Kind of like there's a ghost inside me

It's a bit of a dragon rush, but it's still well written.