Fantasy: I Became the Villain of Destiny

I am the author of this book. I am building a suite of buildings here. If you want to participate, the form is as follows Name Gender Ability Experience I will choose the best.

It starts well after a few dozen chapters. It's rare for a villain in a story to have a son of luck with an IQ. . . The female guide is a bit fast, and the whole story is not detailed enough. It would be better if there were more psychological descriptions and dialogues.

It's great. I've recently become obsessed with villain novels. The villain is invincible. The plot is also very good. This book has many female protagonists, including Zi Piaomiao, Donghuang Honglian, Lou Xianyue, Ji Xuanhuang, Ye Weiyang, Ye Weiai, Fuyao ( Kunpeng), Xiaobai (nine-tailed fox), Tantai Yuyi, Mu Yuan'er, Princess Xingmu, Ji Jiu'er, Gong Qingyan, Qin Yaoyao, Ye Mingyue (Ye Leng's sister), Nezha (can't bear to start), Xiao Ling'er, Shen Xi, Zi Jade, Zi Lingyan (mother and daughter, not related by blood), Lian Yu (young master of Lian Dao Immortal Palace), Wen Qingluo, Luo Jiuxian, Xi Yue Immortal Emperor (master and apprentice), Qin Youlan, Wu Junling, Wu Shengxian, Wu Mulan, Wu Qianjing, Wu Bingbing, Huan Hongyan (Zi Lingyan's master), Yuan Xianxian, etc. I may have forgotten the others, but these are the ones I can think of, hahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

The main reason is that the pace is too fast, which makes me feel overwhelmed. It would be better to add more action or psychological description of the characters. When reading this book, sometimes it feels very abrupt. Why does the protagonist accomplish this thing inexplicably and win people's hearts inexplicably. Generally speaking, it is feasible. I think the style and other aspects are very consistent with the villain. It can also be said that the three views are very positive.

To give you some motivation, I hope you will continue to work hard. As long as you write boldly, we will boldly read it, make bold comments and give five-star praise.

The protagonist is not a virgin, he kills decisively, has a harem, and may have a heroine (he has a fiancée who is Destiny's daughter, but I'm not sure if she is the heroine). The protagonist is strong but there is almost no fighting description in the whole text. What I see now is that the protagonist is in the game. The Destiny's luck is not zero and cannot be killed. Oh, then cripple, the luck is zero, oh, then kill instantly.

It's very beautiful, but I don't know why no one sees it. I personally like it more, and the author gives it a thumbs up.

It's rare to find a villain novel that doesn't end badly [face covering]

Very good! Seriously, this is one of the best villain stories I've ever read! Fast pace, beginning and end. Although there are many pitfalls that have not been filled, there are many things in life that have no ending. The pace is very good! I also like to read harem stories. It lacks some language and descriptions of the contact between the male and female protagonists and people. This is something that can be improved! Everything else is great! Very nice! Support the author! Come on!

It's a very good book with great text. Every time I see a woman, I almost bring disaster to her. Every now and then, there are wheels hitting my face. I like it very much. There are multiple female protagonists at the same time, which is very suitable for my viewing needs. The cool text system adds IQ online plots and harem stories. It is recommended to watch.

Very interesting. I have read 40 episodes. The realm of cultivation in this world is divided into eleven realms: Qi Refining, Foundation Building, Golden Pill, Yuanying, 5 Transformation Gods, Tongxuan, Lianxu, Yuanshen, 9 Saints, Hedao, and Mahayana. Physiques are divided into mortal body, spiritual body, precious body, divine body and supreme body. "The initial level of seeing and hearing the color domineering power is one hundred luck points, the middle level is five hundred luck points, the high level is one thousand luck points, the top level is three thousand luck points, and the ultimate level is five thousand luck points." Luck level: seven-ring halo of red, orange, yellow, green, blue, and purple. "Host: Ji Fengge." "Cultivation: Third level of the Divine Realm - Ye Chen (1X), Nascent Soul ~ Zhang Fan (2X) ~ Lengfeng (3X) ~ Donghuang Honglian (4) ~ Li Changsheng (5) ~ Ji Xuanhuang (6√) ~ Ji Chensha (7) ~ Li Nezha (8) ~ Fuyao (√)

It's okay. It's the first novel I've read in my life. However, there are a few foreshadowings that I haven't written clearly, such as Lu Changsheng and the Phoenix Pearl. I wonder if there will be a second one to make up for these foreshadowings. The system reversal in the ending is something I didn't expect. There are too many women in this novel, and the follow-up does not reveal any strength or the final trump card. To put it bluntly, there is a lot of foreshadowing in the beginning, and in the end I can only watch the protagonist solve it. Overall, it is okay.

This book is well written: I listened to the whole thing: 1. The creative subject matter is good and the writing is quite careful. 2. The plot and chapter design are relatively reasonable, and there are no major logical problems. 3. The villains are vividly portrayed with flesh and blood. 4. The scene design is also quite good. 5. The design of the book's protagonist who kills the lucky protagonist is also very good and is relatively readable. However, many readers seem uncomfortable with books about villain protagonists. After all, people generally like to be positive: 1. Cruelty, killing, blood, etc. 2. A large number of harem heroines, breeding pigs is inevitable 3. The embodiment of weird money, power and PK between men and women 4. Violate ethics or morals, or go against normal logical thinking The villain is an amplified embodiment of all aspects of human nature, and it is also a manifestation of reality! However, readers should not ask for details, this is something you have to figure out for yourself! Even if I write it, I will be castrated by the platform! By the way, the author made an mistake by not writing about the protagonist right away at the beginning of the chapter. I was confused after listening to the first chapter, and I didn't understand until I read it again! This book and are both good villain novels! This book is 5 stars, about 9.5 Points!

Generally speaking, it's okay. It's a standard villain harem novel. I personally didn't like this novel at first. The main reason is that I don't like the author's writing style. There are all kinds of so-and-so sayings: "", especially for those who listen to the book, I feel very uncomfortable. But fortunately, as the plot deepens, the author's writing skills should have improved? Or perhaps I changed this after seeing other readers' suggestions. As for the plot, there are still some holes left unfilled until the end, but overall the protagonist is crushed all the way without being abused, and then the son of evil luck seizes opportunity and luck along the way, while accepting various female protagonists, the worst of which is the saint. The third clan of the Ice Tribe, they were deceived by the protagonist, then slept with the protagonist, and finally abandoned by the protagonist. His Taoist heart collapsed and he was killed by the protagonist. As for the final boss, it was still the same old routine, which was the protagonist's system. The final ending was not bad, it was still good, so I give five stars to support the author.

It's quite good, but there are too few. There are seven or eight novels on the bookshelf, waiting for one or two chapters every day.

I hope the author will make the villain and protagonist decisive and cruel. The villain story must follow the villain's behavior. There is no need to compete with the "protagonist" in a battle of wits and courage, just start with the people around him. The plot just needs to be smooth and sad [dark]. (The above are all my opinions on villain stories)

Exquisite Dice An Hongdou, deep into my bones, lovesickness, I know. The wind and rain are like darkness, and the cockcrow is endless. Now that I see a gentleman, Yunhu is not happy? There are trees in the mountains, and the trees have branches. My heart is happy for you, but you don't know it. May I be like a star, like the moon, and may my light shine brightly every night.

Although there are some holes that have not been filled in, and although it is very impressive, it is indeed a rare and refreshing article. When you don't hide your flaws and don't find faults, your IQ is online. It would be perfect if the description of details were strengthened, whether it is characterization or action blockbusters [laughing]

Come on, author, believe in yourself, hahaha, although the world is one where the weak eat the strong, and you can't do it, but I hope his one is good at refining feathers. It's good to be true, beautiful and perfect. I hope that the protagonist can become unpredictable, unthinkable, unimaginable, and able to predict the future and all things. In the end, I can create another self and another style with my hands. It is so powerful that it cannot be matched or rivaled. The Daoxian route is infinite and has no end. Another 5-star review

Overall, this book is really good to read. Although the male protagonist of this book has a lot of driving scenes in the article, his personal strategies and all aspects can be said to be very good. The content of the book is also very rich. There are many wonderful scenes that are very exciting when reading this book. This book deserves five stars.

I have read the full text, the concept is bright, there are many destiny templates, and the overall flow is quite good. In the early stage, the content of the Destiny Protagonist template was moved a bit too much, and the harem was too sloppy. Some people even forgot about the harem after reading the whole story. In the later stage, the villains tended to be Destined Protagonist stories, and the ending was a bit rushed. There is a point that seems a bit poisonous. The protagonist uses the soul mark to control other people's bodies to get first blood. This person has a personal opinion. As a refreshing article, it's generally pretty good. If you have nothing to do, you can read it [Chigua]

In the early stage, I felt that it was okay. Unlike other villain stories, they were either very domineering and uncomfortable, destroying the family if they disagreed, or overpowering the girl of luck. Anyway, it was uncomfortable to watch; I just don't know what will happen next. Damn it, you didn't even explain this, you only marked one realm and nothing else, so one point will be deducted.

After reading it, I commented that the protagonist of this book is decisive in killing, unscrupulous and unscrupulous. It is suitable for those who like dark villain novels. However, the pitfalls of this article have not been filled, and the ending feels a bit abrupt. I can only sigh with regret. If the author could take his time and not be too fast in the later stages, it might be a work comparable to Evil God. In general, there are holes that have not been filled, but it does not affect the appearance and can be eaten. In this way, the sun, moon, mountains and rivers are still there, and you all move slowly. See you in the next work!

There is no story line between the golden crow's lucky girl and the lucky girl named Xiao.

This is the least frustrating book I have ever read. The children of destiny die very quickly, unlike other novels where only one person dies in more than 100 chapters. It's very refreshing to watch.

It's very good, but the shortcoming is that the Green Man clone is too showy, and the character design changed in the later period. Saving Kyushu does not fit the character's villain design. Harem story.

It's very good, but the ending is a bit rushed, but luckily it didn't crash, but it's still a bit unfinished. It's the only novel I can endure and I highly recommend reading it (there are many harems)

This book is the best and most beautiful in my opinion.

I think it's good, but the identity of the male protagonist will no longer work in the later period. Can you arrange another one? How can you be a villain without having an awesome background?

In the world of immortality, if you have spiritual consciousness, you don't need it; you have to use the knowledge, knowledge, color and domineering spirit.