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The writing is easy and smooth, but it feels very ordinary. There are many childish places in the book, which should be due to the author's lack of experience. The subtleties are missing, and the character descriptions are rough. It is considered a casual novel. The author has a lot of room for improvement. Come on! Thanks for your hard work!

I like single-minded love, but don't like flirting with ambiguity, so I'll give it one less star.

The hole has not been filled. Earlier, the fat man discussed with the system about doing tasks to lose weight, but the system never lost weight. It was a big hole.

I should be able to write more later, but I don't know why the author ended it. Actually quite looking forward to it

Overall, this book is well written. The humor, emotion, heart, and events are all good, and they didn't deviate from the theme in the later stages. The system's auxiliary role is great, but infrequent (it's still awesome hahaha). What's not comfortable is that sometimes in the early stage, there are particularly serious things and situations, and there are some things that are not right (the author explained it, but it just feels uncomfortable). But where is my Feifei! ! !

It's very good and powerful. It would be better if there were some storage rings and martial arts or cultivation.

Very good, keep up the good work

Now that learning can be directly initiated, who still remembers the embarrassment of hard work? ?

This novel, the content, is generally good

It's a very relaxing book. I like this kind of book very much. I can't put it down. It's worth recommending.

Overall, this book is pretty good, and it makes me feel like a fat person.

The story of the book is okay, and the author is rarely "flirtatious", which I feel is very good. The first half of the structure is okay, but it feels a little floaty at the back. It was a bit "incomprehensible", and the ending was very rushed... But it was okay, at least I finished reading...

Not bad, just good enough to watch

Wonderful, super awesome

Very good, not brainless

It's okay╮(￣▽￣)╭, come on, author!

One avoids unnecessary

It's great. Let's watch it together.

This novel is pretty good

This book is wonderfully written

It was well written, but some of the holes dug by the author were not filled in, and it was finished relatively quickly. I look forward to her next one.

A bit real and good-looking

Good, good, good, good

Looks good, keep watching

It's a bit rushed later on

Fine! Interesting!

One word is good!

Smooth and the ending is perfect

A person who always looks back cannot walk far

Not bad. It would be more fun if the plot had more connections with the military and police.