Liulilian

Very good, super recommended. I have read more than 30 chapters and it is very good so far. I just hope that the writing will not get worse and worse. I hope there will not be a female protagonist. Even if there is, don't have a harem. Many novels are ruined by harems. I wish the author will get better and better.

The theme of this book is outstanding, the logic is rigorous, and a main thread runs through it. It has the style of "a mortal's biography of immortality". However, the shortcoming is that some plots are too repetitive, and the process of practicing alchemy is repeatedly described, and there are some language errors.

, I think it's pretty good-looking. The author's writing style is also good, and he doesn't follow trends. The reviews are all 5 stars. Why is the rating so low?

It's good to watch, but the pace is a bit slow. I haven't found a wife yet, bro. . .

It's best to slow down the pace and not be invincible, so it's interesting to watch.

I was persuaded to quit at first, and I was short of books. But after reading it again, it was okay. The author must like writing. If the reminder is less than 100 per day, he can basically only get a perfect attendance award, which is a little more than 300 (the perfect attendance award should be 300). Please don't give negative reviews. After all, the author is also very hard. In addition to work, he has to write novels every day. Please read and cherish it.

Super exciting, very beautiful, this is my favorite type of cultivating immortality.

Good book. I have never read such a good book. I found two waves of people in order to kill a 13-year-old child in the pawn shop. I killed a Qi practitioner at the fifth level at the beginning and then started to play nesting dolls. The ruined family actually has a soul card. Every step is shocking. The main line is clear. I hope everyone can read this book.

I read it when I was in a book shortage and thought it was okay. At least it had a lot of words. I have been following this book for two years. I started reading this book in my first year of high school. Now I am about to take the college entrance examination in my third year of high school. I wish me good luck in the college entrance examination.

It's a very good leisure reading book. I hope the author can write better works.

Code writing is hard work, five stars are given. A relatively pure article on cultivating immortality. The protagonist strives for destiny and never misses any opportunity to become stronger. But we will not advance blindly, and we will all advance and retreat based on our own strength. Think calmly, act decisively, and have no unnecessary nonsense. Have a pattern and know how to utilize and trade. Only by strengthening oneself is the truth. At present, I have followed more than 600 chapters, and there is no heroine. It's okay, and I appreciate it. It's not too late to think about it when you get stronger, but now you're still very weak and don't have the energy to be distracted. It is now in the later stage that the improvement in strength is a bit slow. He has been in the golden elixir stage for a long time. Of course, given his age, he is still the youngest in the golden elixir stage. However, the author gave timely feedback, listened to the opinions of book friends, and said that he would make appropriate changes. It is a novel about immortality that reveals the law of the jungle in the world of immortality. It is worth reading.

This is a normal cultivation novel, with reasonable logic and exciting fighting methods. There are no modern words that can make you want to read more. Unlike some books, it becomes boring after reading it for a while. It's so boring.

I've only read Chapter 8. It's okay for the first time. The killing is decisive. It's just that I just started practicing cultivation. Isn't my first thought about revenge? But his first thought was to become a strong man and crush his bullies under his feet. Other comments will be added later By the way, does the remnant soul in the storage ring want to hide away?

After reading them all, let me talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this book. The advantage is that there is no harem in this book, and there is no romance with the heroine. It is indeed a book about mortals who are struggling to cultivate immortality and rely on themselves a little bit, and they are very decisive and do not write ink. The disadvantage is that the content of this book is a bit single. I keep buying elixirs, participating in auctions, and searching for secret treasures everywhere. This way there is a lot of content, and the future will be much better. Is the author writing a sequel? I hope that the sequel will not repeat the content so much, and simply finish the book. A good book is not about how long it is, but about concise content. Fans will remember your book. I will give you five stars. This is a good book. It's rare for someone who doesn't have a harem. Keep up the good work, the author, and finish the sequel as soon as possible. This book makes people envy the chicness of cultivators. Shu Yihan is really cool.

This is a well-written fantasy novel. Although the protagonist has similar plots in the process of collecting materials, it does not affect reading. I have been reading it for almost a year, but now three chapters a day are not enough. It would be better to have more chapters. I hope to see the protagonist advance to the Mahayana stage and stand at the highest peak soon. Come on, author! ! ! Have you started writing the second part? Looking forward to it.

I'm going after the author's single heroine. I hope the Virgin is not surrounded by a bunch of women. At the beginning, the author said that it was a single girl and it turned out to be a story without a heroine. If you like the story without a heroine, you can watch it. There is no ambiguity and no heroine.

So pretty! Big boost to the author 💪

Cultivation of immortality step by step, there is no luxury of killing enemies to the next level, no harem stories about seeing a woman fall in love with one, no scenes of killing people and stealing goods at every turn, and no scenes of soaring to the sky without going through retreat and experience. This is a true story of cultivating immortals, and it is worth recommending.

A good book, especially the plot setting of the battle of magic, using mana, magical weapons, and secret techniques to clearly demonstrate the advantages of advanced immortal cultivators. The plot is also very exciting. It is a high-quality novel about cultivating immortals. I feel that the score should be higher.

It's so good. I haven't encountered a book like this for a long time. Most fantasy novels are old-fashioned. The author's writing is very good, and there are few old-fashioned novels. Come on, author, I hope it doesn't get worse in the future.

Good book, like it, give it five stars. Come on, author!

The author's writing is quite good. I like this novel very much. The male protagonist is decisive in killing and the woman has only one devoted love. Unlike other novels where the male protagonist has too many women, why is Xiu a Immortal still wandering among so many women?

With unremitting efforts, the quality of the book is very flawless. It is the best among the immortal novels I have read. The protagonist of the story is very interesting to taste and learn. I hope Lei's next articles will be more fascinating. I am looking forward to it...

Yes, it's pretty good. Good luck, author.

I've been reading this book for a while, and I think it's OK visually. Some books become more and more boring after about 100 chapters. They all have repetitive plots and are unreadable. I hope I can finish this book, but I will rate all the books with 5 stars and support the author [smile][smile][smile]

It's quite good-looking, a classic mortal style that people can watch calmly.

The logic is clear, unlike most novels where the words are so unsatisfactory that in the later stage, you don't even know what the foreshadowing you wrote earlier and you forget, you just make up the words. Of course, the author must be able to draw on the writing ideas of French science fiction pioneers such as Ne Verne, and the writing level of domestic Ba Jin, Contradiction, and Jia Pingwa. The author's articles will be more popular.

This novel is about decisive killing. If you like to read about decisive killing, you can read it. Those who say these things are not good. I never care and I am not picky. Update it quickly. I just hope the author will follow it to the fairyland chapter quickly. It is best to update more than 30 pictures a day.

The fights in this book are really detailed, and it is very comfortable and passionate to read. Unlike some novels, the fights are described indirectly and very awkwardly, and the plot is also very good. When you advance to a higher level, the treatment, the number of people in that level, etc. Are all very reasonable. The descriptions are detailed and exciting. It is not a fast-food novel.

The writing is okay. As a sword cultivator, I fight with the sword Tianya. The fighting chapters are a bit repetitive and I always strike first. It cannot be destroyed with one sword like Xuantian Sword! ! ! Destroy the update! ! ! How to enter the big commitment period.