Eternal**

I feel a little dizzy after reading this

What the hell? What is this written about? Damn, I picked up my mobile phone and made a call while writing this fantasy. Why did I end up in the hospital? It's a rubbish book... The author was taught by a Chinese and physical education teacher? Or is he self-taught...

There are typos and repeated chapters.

The scene was inexplicably changed, making no distinction between ancient and modern times. I thought it was out of touch, and I didn't understand where the storyline was.

What are you writing? There are typos, so forget it. After 10 chapters, the story line won't match up. How do you read it?

The chapters are confusing and there are many typos

Too many typos Got it

The plot is a bit confusing. Why does it feel so weird?

What is this, a jump-off-the-floor novel? You are practicing to become an immortal one second and answering the phone the next second? ?