The First Mage in History

Leisure and entertainment to decompress! Music novel comics! Lighthearted and humorous! You're so pretentious and deceptive! Happy mindless reading!

Yes, the concept is novel. Although it travels back and forth, it doesn't have the routines of other novels.

The details are well handled and the character of the protagonist is highlighted, but the updates are too few and one chapter at a time.

Very coherent, the plot has ups and downs and is very interesting to watch.

The content is good, keep up the good work!

Well-founded and convincing, with wonderful details

Not bad, keep up the hard work

Looks great, great, I like it!!!

Beautiful, but the author is missing😅

Well written, I hope the author will work harder