Elf***

The fifth update is here. The plot is very interesting. Although it is a nurturing novel, it does not lose its blood and passion. The whole novel is very exciting and perfectly reflects the outstanding qualities of the protagonist. I highly recommend everyone to watch it.

The biggest fear when writing a novel is that someone will dictate the pace. The author can write according to his own ideas. You can learn from everyone else's ideas, but you must not be dictated by the pace, because everyone's ideas are different. It is impossible for everyone to like it if you are the only one writing it, but I also hope that you can get better and better, come on! ! !

Yes, it looks good, but I just hope that the protagonist is not a virgin, not a harem, not a stallion, and it doesn't have too much intrigue.

It's very good, but the girl comes out so quickly in the early stage, and doesn't come out until the middle and late stages. After all, it would be a bit uncomfortable if it comes out in the early stage.

I've seen the latest chapter, it's very interesting

This book can be described in five words: so perfect! Four words to describe it: Awesome! Three words to describe it: Awesome show! Two words to describe it: perfect! One word to describe: Good! One sentence to describe it: Author, I will send you a box of blades!

Overall, it's a pretty good pet novel, and the portrayal of the heart, expressions, etc. Are all very well done. The only question so far is whether some descriptions, such as the guilt of the protagonist, can be written out multiple times, which feels too cumbersome in literature.

During the Qingming Festival, I saw a child burning paper on the roadside. From time to time, he would secretly throw a few test papers into the fire and burn them. While burning, he muttered: "Sir, you are getting older. It is good for your brain and it can develop your intelligence. If you can't do it, take my class teacher away and let her teach you."

I give you four stars. Your book should be placed in romance novels, not urban fantasy. Really.

Can you please not have a heroine so soon? Author, I hope there will be a heroine when it is almost finished₍˄·͈༝·͈˄◞ ̑̑ෆ

Forgot about the five stars, please give it a try (the author will try to catch it)

How long has it been since you updated, comrade? I'll wait for you for at least seven months. I didn't expect you to open another book.

Very nice, with clear content structure. It is clearly written what time period and what to do, giving readers a good space to continue imagining.

The writing is very good and the author is very useful in all kinds of things, but I don't understand at all that the elf beat Lin Mo's elf to almost death. Why did Lin Mo do this to him?

I give it 4 stars. The less star is because the author did not update the book properly and it was republished twice. Strong reminder! ! !

It feels quite novel

Here comes the Eastern dragon.

Yes, the details are well described, and the initial development is also very slow. It is suitable for those who like to see details. However, the development is indeed a bit slow. The laughter is okay, but you may not know if the Pokémon has changed its name. It is still worth watching.

A very nice book, highly recommended for everyone to read together

The author is natural. Your chapters are a bit short at the moment, but your overall writing is still very good. I just want a quick update. Thank you.

Author, it's been a year. I'm going to come back and update. I said in January that I would finish it. It's been a year. ——2021.12.23.21.28

First, ask the author to reply

Super pretty, but not enough

Very good novel

Five stars is the best evaluation given to the author

Very good, the content is tight and the updates are fast. Keep up the good work*^_^*

I have read a lot of novels like this. To be honest, some parts are good, but some parts are not well written, but overall it is still good, but the process is not passionate enough (in my opinion)

This book is really awesome!

Very nice looking

The combat story is very good, but the protagonist is just a teenager. He is dying because of the failure of the group to detect the elf. He should at least feel a little hateful in his heart, but this is just my personal opinion. Come on, author＾0＾~