Magical Girl Pure Man

The ending of this book is a bit sloppy. It goes too fast and doesn't slow down. I hope you can make a sequel or something. I support you!

This book is so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good (omit 1,000 words here)

I felt like I could write a lot more, but suddenly I lost it.

Personally I think it's very interesting, but anyone with a discerning eye can see that the ending is very sudden and sloppy, that is, the ending of a good story has just begun. This book was written many years ago, and the author has not made any news either in Tomato or anywhere. I doubt... Although it is unlikely, I still hope that the author will return to the West to continue writing or publish a new book. However, is there anyone who wants to write this story? This book also has many flaws and shortcomings, but I like this kind of story plot and subject matter very much. I hope that kind people can recommend similar good books to me or remind me that the author has returned and is planning to publish a book. Thank you all, I'm glad someone shares my interest in an unknown novel. By the way, how did you fall in love with this book? ——…Talks a bit too much

A very nice book. I hope the author will have new works. I suggest you write a second volume based on this book. For example, traveling through another world, war in the universe, etc.

It's a really great book. The rating is indeed low, at least 9 points, but it should be related to the sudden ending. The plot is smooth, the logic is logical, and the characters are on point, but it's just not that kitsch. Maybe this is why the score didn't go up in the end. I can only say it's a pity that I didn't have a better time watching it, but the ending is very appropriate. Keep up the good work, author! ! !

It's so beautiful, but that's the ending... The author remembers that everything must have details (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

The author's writing is super good. I like the author very much. I hope the author can keep writing more.

The overall structure is very comfortable to read. The protagonist has a normal IQ and the setting is perfect. However, probably because of something happening in the third dimension, the author's ending is very sloppy and the conflicts are not connected naturally. I don't know if the author will come back to write it again. In short... I'm looking forward to it. After all, the previous writing is okay.

I particularly like this kind of work that is sometimes burning, sometimes cute, and sometimes grassy (no matter which form it is presented in). However, there are often some expressions in the first half that are a bit strange, and the ending is a bit unexpected, with some holes left unfilled. Overall it's still very exciting, looking forward to the sequel!

Wucao, why don't you continue writing? Why don't you feel that 179 is not enough for me?

The author draws on many magical girl film and television works and adds his own innovations on this basis. It is very novel, with only three short stories in the whole book, but it has already constructed the magical world relatively completely. Although the ending is a bit hasty, it is much better than trying to make up the word count by constantly fighting back and forth to another world. You can read it when you are short of books. It is not long and is a must-have for leisure.

It's so good, so good, so good, so good. I saw that 10 million was omitted here and 90 million was omitted.

Such a delicate transformation can only be found in the transformation articles written three or four years ago.

It would be better to add a few more chapters at the end! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Why do I have to poke so many exclamation marks? Forget it. I don't want to think about it anymore. Keep poking.) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Very good, I hope the author will continue to work hard and write longer and longer

But it's okay, I think the plot is okay, let's keep going...~(~O￣▽￣)~o. . . Rolling around... O~(＿△＿o~) ~. . .

When I was reading this book, I was wondering who the heroine was. Before I read the last chapter, I always thought it was Song Xiaoling. After all, they have met each other's parents😏, and the two of them have been with each other for a long time. Especially when Song Xiaoling and the hero had a dispute in the middle, it felt like the heroine. As a result... I really didn't expect it to be Imona! But thinking about it, it seems okay. After all, Imona has been by the male protagonist's side since the first chapter, longer than Song Xiaoling. Although her presence is also very strong, I don't know why, I ignored the possibility of her being the female protagonist from the beginning. Maybe she always wanted to cut off the male protagonist's something? But overall it's still very interesting to watch, except for the ending, which is a bit sloppy. It would be perfect to have a side story to introduce how the other supporting characters are doing when they return.

The reason for the four-star rating is that the protagonist or magical girl has too few attack methods. Since imagining magic equipment and weapons relies on imagination, and I think imagination is just imagining settings! Then I will add a core idea and imaginary setting: then it can be transformed into any magical girl-related weapon you want! For example, the holy sword (the same holy sword as King Dumao) can cut out the blade, can use the ultimate move to strike with a huge beam of light (the sword of victory), and can also send out sword-shaped laser slashes and swing them at will (sword-shaped beam, small laser sword); for example, the holy gun (it also looks like the same model as my king) ), can emit beams of thrust; such as a magic wand (which can exist as a magic wand in normal times, and can become larger and longer into a wand during combat). The top can be chopped, stabbed, slapped, and smashed. It can be used as a stick, can shoot beams of light, magic bullets, and can emit a huge beam of light to strike down like a holy sword. , Can activate various magics; for example, the top of the sickle can emit laser beams, swing the blade to slash, and stab the head (string gourd); for example, dual-wielding flintlock guns (one long and one short, looks like Kuang San's two guns, with bayonets and sniper scopes), which can fire magic bullets and arrows. By activating the diffuse rain of light (justice from the sky) and the rain of arrows from the sky (the goddess scatters flowers), he has the time ability of Kuangsan. After activating it, the Emperor of the Sky will appear, and the clock hands will appear in a pupil; for example, it can become a Clow card (the Clow card in Magical Girl Sakura and Little Flower Fairy), which can be sealed, summoned, and enchanted.

Like another novel I have read, a lot of foreshadowing was laid, but to no avail.

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Why give me stars? Because there are so few books like this. This kind of writing has themes and plots. It gives me a feeling like the top anime from 5 years ago.

Although it is a bit short, I have to say, it looks good! But... If you don't like cross-dressing men, don't read it.

That's it? It's not enough to watch at all, woo woo, the front and middle are very good, but what can I say about the ending? It's just a bit rushed, and it feels like I want to finish it quickly, which is a bit crude. I hope you can write a similar book, or a follow-up to this book. It's really well written, highly recommended!

It's great, great, I feel very happy watching it. (I'm not saying this pervertedly) Of course it would be better if you don't finish reading it in one day 🙂

In fact, I finished reading this book a year ago (I wrote a lot of paragraph reviews), and I just came to add five stars today. I don't have any thoughts. I just feel that the ending is very sudden. I can write hundreds of chapters of this world view without any problem, which is a pity. (Does anyone know if the author has a new book? I have been looking for this pen name "Ming Sha" for a long time but I can't find it.)

It's really incredible that it only has a score of 8.7. The author can definitely rush to chapter 1000

Emmmm, one little star is missing, because I feel like I haven't finished it yet?

I've read the comic, it's very good (●'◡'●) But I really didn't expect Imona to be the heroine [face covering]

It makes me feel like I'm immersed in it, which is unique among 8-section books.