(Eight more refreshing articles) Chu Feng, who was seriously injured, fell in love with a cool CEO on the night he returned home...
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The female protagonist basically has nothing to do, and the male protagonist only kills people without thinking! It's another story connected by a bunch of women, and there are always women surrounding the male protagonist! In addition to being a hero who saves the beauty, he just knocks on the door without thinking! Apart from force, I don't see any merits such as wisdom and reason in the male protagonist! ! Is the heroine an accessory? ? Or is the female protagonist just a prop to guide the male protagonist? ? ? Alas, there are too many novice books now! ! ! I have browsed Tomato for 10,000 hours, and I am really disappointed! ! ! !
I've read Chapter 51. The male protagonist was murdered by his cronies. He was seriously injured and fled for his life. He met the CEO, and then worked as a bodyguard. He was penniless, loved dogs and mice, and was nosy, but he had no money to buy medicine to recover from his injuries, so he was really a brainless protagonist. In Chapter 51, the male protagonist asked the son of the chamber of commerce for 1 million, and the dean himself gave another 500,000. The male protagonist gave all 1.5 Million to a girl he just met to save her mother. The girl's mother's surgery fee was only 150,000 yuan. Besides, it was a traffic accident. At this time, the male protagonist didn't have a penny and he had old injuries and no money to buy medicine. After seeing this, I really can't imagine how disabled the author's brain is to write the protagonist like this, how can he pretend to be a saint! You didn't show off for a penny, and you just gave 1.5 Million to someone you just met. You're fucking sick and crazy. You gave the girl 500,000, which is enough to recuperate until the girl's mother is discharged from the hospital. What I hate the most is that the protagonist is written as if he doesn't eat the fireworks of the world, but in the end, he has no money to buy medicine to heal himself. This is so fucking stupid!
Very good, keep up the good work
This book is super nice
There is too much nonsense. Is it interesting to spell it out?
Could it be that he is a eunuch?
Little did I know that these authors all like to make their protagonists cynical and masochistic, which is not very interesting.
The plot is okay, but there is one thing that I personally don't like: it's too beep-y. Author, you can check to see if the dialogue in each chapter can be continued. In one sentence, various thoughts and memories can be found. Say a word and everyone's expressions and wonders will be heard. This way of writing is delicate, but I wonder if it is too delicate and necessary. I hope you can be more decisive and have a more crisp dialogue with less exclamations and less subtlety.
The female protagonist basically has nothing to do, and the male protagonist only kills people without thinking! It's another story connected by a bunch of women, and there are always women surrounding the male protagonist! In addition to being a hero who saves the beauty, he just knocks on the door without thinking! Apart from force, I don't see any merits such as wisdom and reason in the male protagonist! ! Is the heroine an accessory? ? Or is the female protagonist just a prop to guide the male protagonist? ? ? Alas, there are too many novice books now! ! ! I have browsed Tomato for 10,000 hours, and I am really disappointed! ! ! !
I've read Chapter 51. The male protagonist was murdered by his cronies. He was seriously injured and fled for his life. He met the CEO, and then worked as a bodyguard. He was penniless, loved dogs and mice, and was nosy, but he had no money to buy medicine to recover from his injuries, so he was really a brainless protagonist. In Chapter 51, the male protagonist asked the son of the chamber of commerce for 1 million, and the dean himself gave another 500,000. The male protagonist gave all 1.5 Million to a girl he just met to save her mother. The girl's mother's surgery fee was only 150,000 yuan. Besides, it was a traffic accident. At this time, the male protagonist didn't have a penny and he had old injuries and no money to buy medicine. After seeing this, I really can't imagine how disabled the author's brain is to write the protagonist like this, how can he pretend to be a saint! You didn't show off for a penny, and you just gave 1.5 Million to someone you just met. You're fucking sick and crazy. You gave the girl 500,000, which is enough to recuperate until the girl's mother is discharged from the hospital. What I hate the most is that the protagonist is written as if he doesn't eat the fireworks of the world, but in the end, he has no money to buy medicine to heal himself. This is so fucking stupid!
Very good, keep up the good work
This book is super nice
There is too much nonsense. Is it interesting to spell it out?
Could it be that he is a eunuch?
Little did I know that these authors all like to make their protagonists cynical and masochistic, which is not very interesting.
The plot is okay, but there is one thing that I personally don't like: it's too beep-y. Author, you can check to see if the dialogue in each chapter can be continued. In one sentence, various thoughts and memories can be found. Say a word and everyone's expressions and wonders will be heard. This way of writing is delicate, but I wonder if it is too delicate and necessary. I hope you can be more decisive and have a more crisp dialogue with less exclamations and less subtlety.
Very good, I hope the author works hard
Why is there no more? What's going on?
It's really well written and worth reading.
Wonderful, brilliant
Can tolerate it
Too many typos
Very nice
Too bad
Beautiful, very exciting
It's okay, just a bit verbose
It's nice to take a look