The curtain opens, let's see the swords and shadows of the rivers and lakes, the love and hatred.
Look at the gangster boy, he is full of high spirits;
See how old and decayed it is, but it still retains its charm;
Look at the mad scholars and Confucian scholars, dissolute and dissolute!
I have a sword that can go to Chang'an and ensure long-term peace and order!
Dear readers, please... Look!
Reader comments
The writing is good, at least it is far better than some erotic and stud novels. However, the author has too many pitfalls and the depth of the character description is not enough. It can be seen that the author wants to write a larger story, but he cannot control it. Many characters appear as a cut scene, but the main line is diluted. In the end, it is a bit free and he writes wherever he thinks! But it's still worth a look!
I prefer this kind of book with less emotional drama. Nowadays, the book world is full of love and love.
How can I put it this way? You should read this book slowly. I really like this type of book. It is not a novice. However, the author's language organization skills still need to be improved. When I read it, I felt that it was not very fluent. I hope you work hard, I'll give it four stars.
The writing style is okay. The story I wanted to tell at the beginning was relatively shallow, but later the idea became grander, but this resulted in some plots being inconsistent. The emotional scenes are also a bit abrupt, but overall they're pretty good and make you want to keep watching them.
I like it, come on, author!
Literary talent is as surprising as a beautiful lady looking back and smiling
The author writes extremely well. Compared with other novels, it has a lot more charm and a lot more truth. It seems to be about swordsmanship and immortality, but in fact it is about human relations and the world. I hope to continue my efforts and write more books like this. This book is not even a bit better than those harems, stallions and the like. It would be better if the language is simpler and more fluent.
Yes, come on, author.
Good, good, good, good
After reading more than 20 chapters, I think it's okay
They are all very good and more in line with my taste. It is difficult to find a book I like on Tomato. The only regret is that there are so many female protagonists that I really can't stand it anymore. Goodbye
Saw the third volume
Very good looking very good
Fans of Brother Cat come to report
Because there is no feedback before, I don't know what plot readers like and what plot direction is good. Everyone comes here to give feedback on the plot, and we can remedy it if we can.
I'd like to correct the realm. I may have written too much and made a typo. Let's start with the Sky Mirror.
Open the sky, shake the stars, support the moon, chase the sun, ascend to the gods.
It's still pretty well written.
It looks good, I gave it five stars.
Not bad, pretty good
Generally speaking, I feel that the starting and final outlines do not correspond.
I just read this book. I saw the shadow of eternity in this book. I don't know if it's my imagination
It looks pretty good so far, but I'm worried about a harem later. Isn't this a multi-female story?
The concept is quite good, but it was written too quickly in the early stages.
I think it's okay, but why are there so few people watching it?
The writing is good, at least it is far better than some erotic and stud novels. However, the author has too many pitfalls and the depth of the character description is not enough. It can be seen that the author wants to write a larger story, but he cannot control it. Many characters appear as a cut scene, but the main line is diluted. In the end, it is a bit free and he writes wherever he thinks! But it's still worth a look!
I prefer this kind of book with less emotional drama. Nowadays, the book world is full of love and love.
How can I put it this way? You should read this book slowly. I really like this type of book. It is not a novice. However, the author's language organization skills still need to be improved. When I read it, I felt that it was not very fluent. I hope you work hard, I'll give it four stars.
The writing style is okay. The story I wanted to tell at the beginning was relatively shallow, but later the idea became grander, but this resulted in some plots being inconsistent. The emotional scenes are also a bit abrupt, but overall they're pretty good and make you want to keep watching them.
I like it, come on, author!
Literary talent is as surprising as a beautiful lady looking back and smiling
The author writes extremely well. Compared with other novels, it has a lot more charm and a lot more truth. It seems to be about swordsmanship and immortality, but in fact it is about human relations and the world. I hope to continue my efforts and write more books like this. This book is not even a bit better than those harems, stallions and the like. It would be better if the language is simpler and more fluent.
Yes, come on, author.
Good, good, good, good
After reading more than 20 chapters, I think it's okay
They are all very good and more in line with my taste. It is difficult to find a book I like on Tomato. The only regret is that there are so many female protagonists that I really can't stand it anymore. Goodbye Saw the third volume
Very good looking very good
Fans of Brother Cat come to report
Because there is no feedback before, I don't know what plot readers like and what plot direction is good. Everyone comes here to give feedback on the plot, and we can remedy it if we can. I'd like to correct the realm. I may have written too much and made a typo. Let's start with the Sky Mirror. Open the sky, shake the stars, support the moon, chase the sun, ascend to the gods.
It's still pretty well written.
It looks good, I gave it five stars.
Not bad, pretty good
Generally speaking, I feel that the starting and final outlines do not correspond.
I just read this book. I saw the shadow of eternity in this book. I don't know if it's my imagination
It looks pretty good so far, but I'm worried about a harem later. Isn't this a multi-female story?
The concept is quite good, but it was written too quickly in the early stages.
I think it's okay, but why are there so few people watching it?