A Sword Across Chang'an

If we don't fight for the sun, moon, mountains, rivers, and stars in the sky, why should we fight for the right path? What's the use? If you die, nothing will be lost. If you don't have immortality, why practice? After tens of thousands of years of practice, you have to take revenge, complain, and fight for eternal life. What can the right path give you? Did it give you life or strength? Life will not bring you, death will not bring you away, and it is difficult to calm down. Just practice and then calm down. Can the right path give you peace of mind? I don't understand those people who talk about the right path every day. If the right path is really so important, there will be no practice. Yin and yang have their own meanings, so why say those things and words in the name of the right path.

The writing is good, at least it is far better than some erotic and stud novels. However, the author has too many pitfalls and the depth of the character description is not enough. It can be seen that the author wants to write a larger story, but he cannot control it. Many characters appear as a cut scene, but the main line is diluted. In the end, it is a bit free and he writes wherever he thinks! But it's still worth a look!

I prefer this kind of book with less emotional drama. Nowadays, the book world is full of love and love.

How can I put it this way? You should read this book slowly. I really like this type of book. It is not a novice. However, the author's language organization skills still need to be improved. When I read it, I felt that it was not very fluent. I hope you work hard, I'll give it four stars.

It has a bit of flavor, but the force value and realm in it are too low. It was a bit confusing at first, but after reading and understanding the background later, it looks like a very small martial arts world. The world view is too small and not grand enough.

The writing style is okay. The story I wanted to tell at the beginning was relatively shallow, but later the idea became grander, but this resulted in some plots being inconsistent. The emotional scenes are also a bit abrupt, but overall they're pretty good and make you want to keep watching them.

I like it, come on, author!

The writing should be okay, but it's really literate and boring. It has 80 chapters and there is no emotional drama at all. I still haven't understood it at all. It's really boring and I don't have the motivation to read it anymore, so I stopped reading. I think there are many people who think the same way as me.

The author writes extremely well. Compared with other novels, it has a lot more charm and a lot more truth. It seems to be about swordsmanship and immortality, but in fact it is about human relations and the world. I hope to continue my efforts and write more books like this. This book is not even a bit better than those harems, stallions and the like. It would be better if the language is simpler and more fluent.

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