Online Game: Start a Grocery Store

This book shouldn't be rated so low The main character is the Holy Mother, and she also gives away things like crazy

Even my Chinese class representative's Chinese language proficiency cannot comment on how good this book is, right?

It's a pity that such a good book has been criticized by a group of people who don't understand anything. You have to read those cold-blooded, emotionless, and unemotional novels. I think this novel is very well written, the plot is very smooth, the emotions are not stiff, and there is no hint of harem. It has a sense of humor, and can also add funny elements in appropriate places. Overall, it is very good. It can be said to be in the middle and upper reaches. I hope the author can work hard and write another one. And I think I can add a sentence from Wuyou in the last sentence. I hope everyone can support me.

It's so beautiful. From the first to the last picture, I never get tired of it.

It's okay, but it's not good for people with strong vanity.

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I really don't want this book to end, really... Really, is the author considering a second season? It doesn't matter if you go slower (two or three years later is fine), I really want this story to continue, really, please (sincerely)...

I like this material very much, and I also like the author's writing style. The author writes very well, but in the part I saw about the girl who saves the orcs, I think the protagonist's mother's heart is very overflowing, and the businessman I agreed with before has been giving away very precious epic costumes. Be prepared, if there is a transaction, I can still understand, but keep sending, just for a businessman, you know, and for the enemy's children, he already hates you to the bone, and you still want to save him, don't you know why there is the word "eliminate the roots"? I haven't watched the subsequent plot, but I estimate that this child may become the big boss of the orcs. Then the protagonist's friends and the protagonist will receive special treatment from the big boss, but this will cause other humans to be hostile and think that they have betrayed humanity. Therefore, although the protagonist's friends may save their lives, it does not save them but harms them. Think about it carefully, how will a person who is considered a betrayal of the race be treated when he returns to the race? Sometimes mental injuries are more serious and more unsolvable than physical injuries. Also, after I finished writing the review, I scrolled down and saw a lot, a lot of people who read it for more than 40 minutes, people who read it for more than 30 minutes, and people who took less than 30 minutes to criticize this book. Is it because the protagonist is a dog licker? It's not that licking, right? The protagonist doesn't like people at all, and there's nothing wrong with licking a dog. If you like someone, you're willing to give everything you have. Isn't this the ultimate form of love? Isn't it the ultimate romance? I really don't understand what's going on in this world? Just because of the love brain and dog-licking, any similar behavior will be criticized. Is it wrong to fall in love with someone?

I personally think this book is well written, and the plot is quite exciting. I think the author writes the emotional changes of some characters very vividly, which makes her/them not just literal. For example, the character "Kendo Chenxin", in my opinion, he is cold and heartless from the beginning, keeps away from strangers, is arrogant, pursues perfection, and is gradually warmed in his heart. He starts to laugh and starts to pay because of this "friend" he considers. Try to give the greatest help that I can give. In my opinion, he is alive and has real emotions. I like those words "This is what my friend taught me" and "He is not an NPC but my friend." I really felt warm at that time. Although I don't know what "Master Liu" and "Kendo Chenxin" have experienced, I really feel that he is alive here. I am very curious about why he is with Di Ji because I haven't seen how the two interact and what "Kendo Chenxin" likes about Di Ji. For another example, I also think that "Flower Loli" is portrayed very well. I see a strong, arrogant, and ambitious natural leader. Perhaps being arrogant and underestimating the enemy is her weakness, but you can't help but admit that she is strong and capable. In my opinion, she is a natural leader. I don't dare to think that without the intervention of the male protagonist, she will really build the empire she talks about. By then, she will definitely not be quite a queen. She will want to be a king. When I see the ambition and actions of "Flower Loli", I really feel that she is alive. In short, some characters are really well created in my eyes. But I really don't understand the ending and the chapters near the end. I feel that the ending should not be like this. I feel a little bit tearful (maybe because of my low tear point). The writing is good but there are certain problems and shortcomings. I hope to see more sophisticated writing and environmental description and plot logic issues (my personal suggestion is just to talk about). Can the author write an extra chapter?

Super nice book. Like it. I won't talk about the strange players. The relationship is such that even players look down on NPCs. As NPCs, they actually have to go out of the city to fight monsters. They don't know how to send out tasks and they also take damage for players. I laughed. I have a similar relationship with you two. It also seems that I am very powerful. A rare five-star good book.

The plot of the whole book is great, but the ending doesn't feel very good. The overall details are great.

This novel is very, very beautiful. I stayed up until 3 o'clock and finished reading it. It's so enjoyable that I still want to watch it after I finish watching it.

The content is still good, but there are a few small loopholes. For example, every time you fight a boss, especially the boss that all players fight together, the final kill list does not show the ranking of the player character played by the store manager. Even if the name is hidden, there should be a position. These do not exist and cannot appear, so players will not be suspicious. After all, the player role played by the store manager is still very powerful in the eyes of all players. There is no news about him in the kill rankings. How can a high-level player not be suspicious. @The author greatly hopes that he can respond to this later. Overall, this book is at least worth reading.

The book is very good, and the subject matter is also very good, but it always feels weird when I read it. There are still some holes that have not been filled in, such as the favorability level. The ending is quite satisfactory. If I hadn't read the comments, I wouldn't have known that Wuyou said it.

I was deeply moved after reading this book, and I never thought I would cry because of the novel. Kendo Chenxin was indifferent at the beginning and had no friends, but he paid a lot for an NPC in his eyes. The NPCs around Wuyou store manager gradually developed an inseparable relationship with him. Even though the store manager has been fighting against the highest authority in the game, he never gave up, because there were people around him that he could not let go.

The progress of the plot in the early and middle stages is okay, but it is relatively flat in the middle and later stages. The plot in the later stages starts to loop. Regarding this ending, there is another possibility. The protagonist and the NPCs in this world all retain their previous memories, but after the protagonist is reset, everything will start a cycle again. All players' memories will be lost, but neither the protagonist nor the NPCs will. If only those people had persisted in the middle and later stages of the book, the book's rating wouldn't have been so low.

The Taoist temple is only in the innermost part. It is a shrine with the statues of the Three Pure Ones placed on it. However, compared with the shining golden Buddha statues, the three pure gods look a bit miserable. "Look, these are the three pure states of Taoism. Look at the so-called Buddha and Wucao. Each of them has a golden body. Even the Bodhisattva and the Arhat have a golden body. But what about the three pure states of Taoism, which are the highest position? They are just made of clay. Isn't the gap too big?" All the monks believed in Buddhism, cheated money, and waited for Shen Hand to get the money.

The writing is great, but there is a small flaw, which is the problem between Luo and Luo, but it is not a big problem. Many people say that the ending is not good, but I think it is good, especially the last sentence. Is this really just a memory? Perhaps in the eyes of most players, this is just a memory, but for Wuyou and others, it is not only a memory but also a personal experience. The door of the Wuyou grocery store on the ninth floor is not closed, but people are still there. What kind of story will there be when Wuyou reaches the ninth time? The last chapter can be thought of the encounter between Wuyou Ninth Level and Su Su, Xiao Hei, Liu Li, and Zi'er. It arouses endless reverie. Great!

I have finished reading this book. There are some flaws in the front, but it is indeed a good story. I like this book very much. In my opinion, I don't know how much better it is than those fast food articles. I really can't figure out why so many people criticize it. After reading those negative reviews, I feel like a troll

It looks good, but I don't know why that black shadow is investigating Wuyou. Does that black shadow know that Wuyou is a real person? Please answer.

Nice! Why is the rating so low? ! ! Highly recommended! Look! Show me! ! ! I really don't know that those who watched less than half an hour are talking nonsense in the comment area. I admit that the first few chapters are indeed a bit discouraging, but the later chapters are really interesting. Doesn't he feel happy when the protagonist explodes his vest and kills monsters? Ah! ! ! Book friends, don't be misled! ! !

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Oops, why didn't Susu and the others see Wuyou in the ending😤😤

Watching it from beginning to end, I have to say that the plot is very exciting, but I am wondering if there will be a follow-up. Although the store manager is alive, shouldn't Susu and the others be given a good home?

When you think this is a game, don't forget that this is reality for NPCs Don't look at Xing Shao, they are all written by the navy. Some didn't even watch it for half an hour, and some even watched it for an hour, and there were only more than 50 chapters. There is also one called "I won't say what it is called." The navy said it through his own eyes, and all of them were withdrawn. If you have the ability to send it, don't withdraw it.

This book is the only one I have finished reading. It may indeed have the problems mentioned by other book friends, but if you read it carefully, some chapters will have a great impact. For example, when you are very lonely, a group of people appear. They have been with you for a long time, and suddenly one day you are the only one left. You desperately want to find them but you are unable to do anything. You must understand the feeling. Fortunately, it is just a dream. Finally, when everyone thought the store manager had disappeared, the store manager returned to reality and became true friends with the players.

Not bad, but the character is not well drawn, and I feel like I have no motivation. If I don't want to open a store, what's the difference between it and salted fish?

I hope the store manager can launch new products Name: Brilliant Holy Sword Quality: Epic Effect: When the player's HP is lower than 10%, restore 50% of HP and increase attack power by 300% for ten seconds. Skill: Judgment (increases damage by 200% and deducts 5% of energy per second for five seconds)

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Nb, Gaga looks good, must be praised